All Comments on 'Vicki's Video'

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CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 7 years ago

Damn, that was a brilliant seduction and I loved that Vickie got the cliffhanger at the end, which makes me kind of hope for another part to this story. Great job, Otazel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice twist at the end

I suspected the seduction, but not the twist at the end. Yes, it would have been too predictable, too cliched, for them to swap immediately. Supremely erotic without being 'mechanical', which would have led to me skipping bits!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"At eighteen we both had a highly developed sense of adventure, especially when it came to the opposite sex, but we each still needed another girl as mutual support, especially as men always seemed to hunt in pairs."

But the deceit to get her to eat snacht is romantic. LOL.

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