All Comments on 'Video Story: Violet and the Cute Redhead'

For starters, the girls/women are for the most part dressed in what's essentially street clothes. A bit more skin would help. A lot. If you're not willing to provide actual nudity, you might at least consider putting them in something tight and tiny. Something a pretty young thing might wear to a club. You might even make that a theme: Spend some time in hair and makeup, dress them up in a micro-miniskirt and a revealing top, and have them tell their story while perched on a stool in a barroom setting, sipping on a cocktail. And if they aren't going so far as to actually masturbate, they WOULD be able to at least rub and caress themselves OVER their clothing, don't you think?

And have somebody work with the girls on their story, for God's sake! It seems that the majority of them are either making it up as they go, or they're telling the story like they've repeated it a hundred times. Have somebody coach them on how they're doing it right or doing it wrong, for fuck's sake. Oh, and that whole "vocal fry"! Don't get me started. If I want to listen to a woman or girl talk like a frog, I'll watch something with the fucking Kardashians.

Anything would be an improvement over the lack of attention paid to the set, the lighting for the set, the absence of makeup or hair styling, the nondescript clothing choices, and the uninteresting way they try to tell a story.

I hate the talking of the story.Its not exciting,very boring to listen to.Think u should dump this video idea.

This one was boring compared to the last one. I would like more graphic descriptions of what they do with each other.

Being the first one I've watched it was OK but would like more details and also would like to watch the storyteller get more aroused if that is so.I know in my fantasies that play through my mind I cannot help but stroke myself.

aside from this being so boring, I am begaining to wonder if this is even worth it I mean there is a few that is good but come on if this does not get any better I am going to quit watching these

Plz can you tell that story about when you and her hooked up in a hot tub? And plz share other g/g stories.

and red hair, wish I could afford her

Nothing erotic about this story. TOTALLY BORRRRRING! She sounded like a little girl like, you know, plays with her hair a lot. Video is not for her.