All Comments on 'Vindictive'

This story had me on the edge of my seat...i was drawn into their world;)

This seems to me like a rape story. For me, it's a turn-off. The story is well-written, however.

This is a rape story she said several times no, if he persists after that point it is rape in any country. This story is not about anal sex, this is about a pig of a man raping a young woman in her own hotel room and then trying to hide behind a non disclosure form. I have checked and where I come from a non disclosure agreement does not protect the perpetrator if they commit a crime (rape) or provide protection from litigation resulting from their negligence (car accident). I gave this a rating of " 1" because it is a rape story and those do not deserve to be printed. Put this in the right category or better yet the trash bin. I am disappointed with the people that favorited this trash.

I agree with Lonewolf2013 that this isn't anal, this is non-consent. She said no several times. Xelliebabex is one of my favorite authors & I love her work, so well-crafted. Not this time, however.

You serious need both!

and also grammar/spellcheck

1 no means no....

She already said no and now she gets fingered so hard she’s being pussy punched with his fingers. Not at all sexy, sorry. Non consent is one thing, but non consent and physical abuse just reeks of rape. While I normally love your work, I really struggled to even read this one.

just plain stupid.

no means no, the guy is a rapist. Non disclosure or not, he would do jail time.

the contract does not protect him and could easily be proven signed under duress.

this is pure trash. sorry.

love many of your other works, but this is garbage.

Disgusting. Too bad minus 100 isn't a valid score.

anal that too rapey and no lube

100% disaster

i hate it when the best lit writerrs are being so ignorant about preparation of anal sex

no pain from anal doesnt give you orgasm

that anal you wrote really sucks you finished it in 3 paras too rushed too careless and too brutal

is this how you do it at home?

no so why make it painful for your readers to read?

stop scamming your readers

this is first work i really hated

1 star

i looove ass fucking...

with the last four this section, and expect the rest of the 11 are similar...

your up-till-now OK rep totally blown with this one...

one star

no means no

not sure and don't care if this Oz or England-Spacey currently on trial for presumably similar...