All Comments on 'Violating the Waitress'

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SparksWillFlySparksWillFlyabout 6 years ago
High Wardrobe Budget

If they play this game often, buying replacement clothes will bankrupt her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Slight detail

Very good stuff.... but.... I find the excessive use of triple periods distracting... Kind of hard to get turned on... when... you.. start.. reading... it as... "dotdotdot". XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Was that a plot twist at the end?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Really good keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

Please write part two 56B

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago
Please ...

... write more of this story!! But let her "assailant" be a little easier on her clothes LoL she works at a greasy spoon diner after all!! Thank you! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Her man....

Can buy more uniforms for her, if they won't be more careful. Good story. 5*. More of this story and/or more like this. I particularly liked that there was no cock sucking. Any man who wants his cock sucked should suck 3-4 himself before he asks a girl to do it.

Don't just stand there reading this. Write more. NOW.

puma0916@hotmail.com

doorknob22doorknob22almost 4 years ago
Oldest cliche in the world of erotica.

Oh, wow, it was actually her boyfriend. Who would've seen it from the first paragraph.

merrySMmerrySMabout 2 years ago

This is not non-nonsent. Bait and switch is what it is and it should be in the fetish category. I gave it one star because I really dislike this cliche type of story.

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