All Comments on 'Virtue vs. Desire Ch. 01'

This story shows so much promise, and you've set the stage for so many interesting possibilities. I hope the next chapter doesn't take too long, I'm certainly looking forward to it! You are a very gifted writer, best story I've read lately, keep up the good work and post next chapter soon, please.

A great start, and realistic, most people when it comes to the desire of the flesh will have a conflict at some point within their conscience, whatever a person's upbringing, thus wondering if there is something wrong within their mind conjuring up images that would seem inappropriate within their specific relationship status, feeling hesitant to share such thoughts with their partners...a big thumbs up😀

A fun romp into the sexual landscaping services. The author gave a good attempt at building tension and put some passion into the big sex scene.

The characters are a bit too implausible and nearly cliche, but you’re making it work so far.

We all have them. We all fantasize about being with others. Men and women alike have fantasies. How many actually act on them? I think Etta will, and Sonny will probably be watching from the shadows. I think they both want it for different reasons but don't want to admit it. Great start to a good suspenseful story. A *4 rating.

Enjoyed this first chapter ~ story shows a lot of promise! Thank you :)

Pretty good. But hells bells also super frustrating. Over and over the same thoughts of arousal. For an entire page. Get them exchanging the dirty fantasies in both their minds WAY quicker. For me anyway.

Fine line between great preamble and get on with it, we know it's cumming so lets do it.

Hey dickbreath, write one about a Muslim whore and cuck. That marriage would probably be a little “rocky”.

This is good. Very exciting.