All Comments on 'Visiting Kylie'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Can you please write more.

I savor your stories and read them more than once. Huge fan. Very wet. Thanks. 😘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
romantic?

why make this sound romantic, I was raped and beaten and left for dead on a dirt road in the forest. (my old running track) 3 of the 4 were caught. I was 17

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Older man, younger reluctant but ultimately willing woman: works well with your comedic writing style. Gang rape of a virgin by three boys who overpower her: not so much. Suspension of disbelief just ain't happening with the situation vs her internal dialogue here. Nice that you are trying new situations though, babysitter vs 200th sexually frustrated Dad was getting really old.

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