by nevinc
Visiting Paris with My Girlfriend, is a fine romance story, but it is too short in all aspects. The background to the story is hardly described at all, and there is no proper introduction to the characters, much less character development. The love scenes are well-written, but they are also too short, and the story ends much too abruptly without any proper conclusion. Accordingly, this story needs a sequel. Having said all this, this story is well written and its overall romantic atmosphere fully justifies its placement in the Romance genre.