All Comments on 'Vivian's Story Ch. 03'

thank you so much - that was a very nice conclusion

You are a sensitive and sexy writer. Keep going!!!

it was extremely erotic and showed great talent and imagination

Loved it. Truly red hot - in more ways than one! Keep going hun. xx

The writer sets a romantic scene and captures the emotional and physical intensity of submission, the orgasmic moment and the subsequent afterglow.

I hope the author is encouraged enough to keep writing.

Mk

it was a good story did the bizz for mewet n wild,,