Vixxen Ch. 07: Adventures in Vegas

Vixx, I don't have to write to be able to read and understand what I am reading. These stories are nothing more than rambling, nasty, trash. It takes no courage to write something like this and post it in the wrong place. You wanted the readers to hate it and you got your wish. If you post here, then I will read it and comment as I see fit. Your choice on posting, mine on commenting.

But vulgar negativity from people who have the courage to criticize but not the courage to write anything themselves?

That I have a harder time with.

Why leave even one of your piece of shit stories out of this ir cesspool? There is nothing constructive possible to say about garbage like this.

Throughout this whole series, I am struck with how truly sweet and loving Vixxen's heart is!

Despite all the trials and tribulations, she always tries to find the best in people, and anyone who receives her love is so lucky, but it shows that a lot of people have their own personal shit to work out, before they can truly be satisfied with having someone truly loves them. I hope that Mason gets his act together....

I removed comments for what I saw here.

I don't mind constructive criticism, but I do not find anything here constructive.

I wrote the end for having been told that you should never say to be continued, even on a continuing story.

I will probably write one more chapter in this series, but the rudeness involved here very nearly led me to delete all of my work, and has certainly reduced my desire to write here.