All Comments on 'Voyeur'

I can see this as a starting point to a great series. Thanks for this story

Glad this has been well received so far :) Will draft a second chapter.

First off, I want to say that I admire your style of writing. I'm an over-writer and share every detail, but I love your minimalist style. It feels very experienced- well practiced.

Then all I want to say is that this was amazing and super hot. I love how fleshed out Rachel was as a character. Great fucking job

Love all your stories. You are extremely gifted and I am looking forward to chapter 2. This should be a fun series.

Keep up the great writing.

I need more! This was an amazing first chapter!

Great writing, great plot, great start-- need I say more?

I do hope these two work out well together. Quite a way to make an introduction peeping through a skylight. A clever beginning and I do hope there is a chapter 2 or better yet more.

Of all your stories, this is my favourite. The way they meet and the fact that Rachel doesn't come off as some irresistible beauty like your other heroines. I love the way they both come together and she's very much girl-next-door (ignoring the peeping tom aspect haha)

It so unlike your other stories and I like it! Keep it up.

The story had pace and great descriptions. Male strength and power well described.

This story was perfection itself. It does not need a continuation, it could be left as it is and still be wonderful, but hell, just like everyone else, I'd welcome a continuation of course! I agree with the person who said it's a minimalist style or writing, and it's great. I was surprised that the two of them did not kiss! Or maybe I missed it? The idea of sex without at least a kiss seems amazing to me, but hey, that's just me, I suppose. I think you've touched on every voyeur's secret fear, and indeed, for some of them, their secret hope. Five stars, and thanks, JB

I really enjoyed this. Well written and leave me wanting to know more. I hope this isn't the end.

Thanks for writing it.

This has been one of my favorite. I’ve fingered myself so many times watching this... I can never make it to the end.. I can never make it to page 2 without cumming at least once..

Beautiful find! Love love the story!

Perfectly crafted! And now onto the series…

Omg, I loved this! Can’t believe she ran off on him, though. He’s definitely a keeper! I’m eagerly awaiting the spanking she’s gonna get for not keeping her word! LOL. Go dominate her, big boy! 😄❤️👏

This is the fourth time reading this series. It is my favourite.

Good premise.

Sex too rushed. Too abrupt. Lacks step-by-step details.

Three stars.

I'm not usually one for quick buildup, but gosh! You did this one really well. Sizzling yet with the delicious promise of more to come. Love it!

Guurrrlll! I love your stories!

this may just be the hottest story on this site!!! absolutely love the guy