All Comments on 'Voyeur gets Voyeured Ch. 02'

Loved the 'interventions'. Well written.

I'm still not buying all the hot inexperienced "18 year olds". The boat scene with them and all the teasing's don't fit that age group. The entire dialog about them makes me think about younger teens. Very creepy to read!

If you want to publish stories on Literotica, all the characters having sex HAVE to be eighteen or older. I've had to go back through stories I've submitted with teenage sex in it and jack up the ages even though it doesn't read right after the change. Most readers that know the rule sooner or later figure it out. Enjoy. Great story. 5* // SteveWallace, Romantic1, and TLCgiver on this site.

It flows pretty well.

One technical comment: please work on placing your quotation marks correctly. Often, you include text that is obviously not part of the quote. Interrupts the flow of the reading.

awesome....especially like the writing style agin