All Comments on 'Waiting'

by magmaman

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JusttooldJusttooldover 11 years ago
good

Good story. It had me visualizing every thought they had and how they were experiencing the events.

Keep them coming.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WAIT YOUR TURN

and no line jumping, TK U MLJ LV NV

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 2 years ago

It would be nice to have had this kind of money.

49ers6949ers69about 2 months ago

Decent story, but I don't know why, but it seems like most of the writers have an obsession with woman that have a full bush suddenly have a need to either shave bald, leave a little tuft of hair, cut into a V shape, landing strip, or some other stupid ass shape. Pubic hair not only shows maturity, but is also very sexy. To me it just turns me off somewhat to the story. That is just my opinion.

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