by lustybard
it nice... usually most of the first person stories are short and quick.. this one is really nice!
You write incredibly well, I'm slowly making my way through your stories. This was so unbelievably hot!!!
...eloquent, fiery, just the right amount of force and pleasure. Please write more!
Please please please please add more! It would make me the happiest girl in the world :)
Very atmospheric! I loved the nararation and the story was graphic without being crass. Very, very sexy.
You're an amazing writer, el James has nothing on you, hon. You should write your own book.