All Comments on 'Waking Up with Brooke Ch. 01'

Maybe next she brings in a guy with a big cock to fuck them both. She could feminise him too.

Looking forward to seeing him get fucked by her. I wouldn't want to see him be feminized though. In any case, I hope to see chapter 2 soon.

I would be her girlfriend.. probably full time ..

Love to see him be the girl.. maybe even go out together as girls and yes, maybe bring home a special for both of them on occasion.. but not to interfere with their relationship

Please continue :) Is she part of a TGirl soroity?

My only complaint is when you switch from third and first person. I noticed it a few paragraphs in when you started writing "I" and "he". Other than that a fantastic start to a story!

Often alcohol is used to overcome inhibitions and achieve true desire. Being patient and observant can help finding right person to get together. It will happen.

Can't wait for Ch.2

I'm hooked. More to come I hope.

Very good story, fairly well written and featuring 2 likeable characters.

Only flaw was the foot fetish thing, which seemed unncessary. Of course that's just something that doesn't interest me personally, so if it's a fetish of yours, or something you enjoy writing about than don't worry about what I think, lol.

Where can I meet a devilish angel like her :D

love to feel her legs wrap around my neck as she pumps her cock in my mouth!