All Comments on 'Walk a Crooked Milf Ch. 01'

You’ve really got me wondering what’s going to happen next and in which direction the story is heading. Hopefully not turning him into a sissy. I guessed the camera, the escort, and the mistress but you really surprised me with Mrs Cashmore’s sexuality. I really did expect her to be transsexual.

A well written, as usual, take on a basic storyline but with my usual observations, I won’t say complaints, in respect of your punctuation. But you’re not the only writer who disagrees with me.

I loved the ‘knicker-nicker’ reference. 😂

Off to a great start! Thank you!

Love your stories Michelle! Especially the ones where the Woman is Dominant...are you the same Michelle Nylons that's on Fetlife?

A very erotically written story and no rush to get into the storyline, I seriously enjoyed it. The only critic I could have, would be the need for using long un need vocabulary.

But other than that beautifully written and I cannot wait for another installment.

My, my, very interesting and fun start - I'm looking forward to the follow on adventures promised here - though I imagine I won't literally read straight through without interrupting myself (and sad I never lived in a neighborhood like this - that I know of)

Excellent work. Thank you.

what can i tell you, came in my panties reading this one, cant wait to read more

My dream woman

I definitely want to read more

Cannot wait for more

You must have access to my memory. There are many similarities between my life and William’s interactions with Ms. Cashmore. Great stuff as usual Michelle.

It's so good to see a wonderful story like this. I'm so looking forward to seeing where this is headed. (Thanks)

Incredible start! You're a prolific writer, but I've never seen a start to a story like this. Can't wait to see where you take it!

Wow!

Steamy erotic lust......

Thank you!

Thank you kindly,

What you have written for us all to admire is simply delicious and a pure delight to read . I don’t mean to rush but, I can’t wait to get to part two . Thank you kindly 💋💋💋

...love it!

Michele I have read most of your stories and the only thing I can say is I love you!

You are my favorite author and I wish I could actually meet you in person. I have a feeling that you are from Australia or possibly Britain. I'm from a community in the central part of the province of Alberta, Canada.

Who would not love to be under Mrs Cashmore's control?

Must read more... now! :-)

Excellent; really enjoyed this. Well written and well paced. I look forward to reading more.

Loved your story

Great story! I wish this had happened to me.

fantastic!