All Comments on 'Walt's Gift'

Well Scorpio, two new tales on the same day and I get to be the first to comment. This one was so different from your "Petra" series – a lighter, more straight forward piece well suited to the Group Sex category. I enjoyed the theme and your characters were very lovable to say the least. So the Sultan dies and his son inherits the Harem – this should be good for a few spicy chapters! How about it? Pete.

your best story so far,interesting,erotic and very well written.

I hope there are more chapters to follow.......

WOW what a wonderful story!! I hope you keep writting but it will be terrible difficult to top this one.

Great story..

Please keep writing???

These people are real and while a little puffed up each is really enjoyable.<P>

My question is why did his father sentence him to die this way?<P>

Nice work Author - more would be appreciated though it doesn't need to be a continuation of this story as there isn't much more to be said is there.<P>

With High Regard

Enjoyable, fast-paced with realistic, endearing characters who find each other through some of life's painful experiences. Top-notch storytelling, Scorpio44. I thank you.

As the other commentors said it was a good story. Thank you for entertaining us. Mike from Texas

Scorpio, I look forward to reading more. Thank You. Ronnie W.

What can I say? one of the most beautiful, touching, erotic pieces of work I've ever read. Of course, with a name like Scorpio, i knew it'd be better than halfway decent before reading it. Great work, can't wait to read more of your stuff!

This is absolutely the sweetest Group Sex story on the list. Let there be love, Scorpio, and we want to hear more from Nick and the ladies.

What a wonderful story! Touching, loving and sweet, a story I will remember for a long time. And one of the best stories and description of a polygamous 'marriage' I've ever read. Thank you and please keep writing. Kisses! xoxox

While I am not personally a practitioner of group sex, nor had any experience with it; this is a very lovely story and it is told with class and gentility. As Nick described his relationship with and love for/of his father, I felt the tears flow down my face until I couldn't read.<br>

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In so many ways, the tenderness portrayed between father and son made me remember times with my own father now gone almost 20 yrs. Like Walt, my father's word was his bond, and he kept it and honored it no matter what.<br>

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Thank you for a beautifully told tale of exclusive relationships and one with no jealousy or envy.

Thank you, this theme is truly beautiful and I hope you will continue with the story.

You have a tremendous heart. Thanks for sharing.

oh wow i so love this story - it is so sensitive and caring

Thank you for your gift of letters, it was an enjoyment to read.

Enjoyed the writing, reading it, and the feel of the story. Amazing that a father could share that much with a son and the son could honor his father by continuing his

legacy. The spirit of the story is HUGH. Thank you for sharing. GP

Pat didn't need to know how to "drive a bobtail" if they flew East and towed West.

Tootsall, I noticed in another story, that Scorpio44 used the term "bobtail"' apparently referring to some sort straight truck. He is evidently unaware of the fact that, in the trucking industry, a bobtail is an unattached semi-tractor.

For anyone who doesn't know, there are 3 more chapters to this story posted under "Scorpio44a".

I love this story and I desperately want this in my life. I'm 29 and married to a wonderful man who neglects me. He's a lawyer and he's married to his work. I'm too young to be a widow. I was a cheerleader in high school and I've kept my shape. What good does it do me??? I want someone to fuck me hard. I want to be used. I want to feel this kind of desire. Yes, I even want to be raped. I have considered so many scenarios.. Most of them are crazy. Most of them would involve far too much risk. I want to fuck a stranger. If I could do it without risking my reputation or my marriage I would fuck a stranger right away.

Please contact me if you have suggestions, ideas, or offers...

Laura

I love the way your imagination works and the different scenarios you conjure.

A series based on these characters could be as good as Leaving The Navy which I conider to be one of your best

Typical Scorpio story.

Excellent!!!!!

5/5