by qualitywheat
...And my second guess is that in addition to that, you're also way too young to legitimately be on this website in the first place.
The sentence construction was nowhere to be seen, but the naughty old English writing was refreshing. Both characters were a bit caricatured but the sex was enjoyable.
Don't listen to the Americans. It's not your fault they need everything spoonfed in the same old way.
Truth to tell after perusing your first few stories I considered you ' something of a hack'. A curve of improvement seems to be in place and I'm withdrawing that assessment forthwith. You ratcheted up intrigue taking time to define's character . Much appreciated. Could have drawn out explorations / attempts to bed her a few more chapters (a.k.a. Always Wanted To) sensation of winning endgame that more vivid. No matter what, however, this was spanking good read!TY.
THAT'S NO WAY TO TREAT YOUR MOTHER , NO MATTER WHAT THE REWARD IS.YOU COULD HAVE LOST HER FOREVER . LAROC OF AGES
Hot and remember some like it rough but you have to read the signals like Jamie read his mother's signals correctly.