by magmaman
Story told in slow but ever-tightening concentric circle like a shark languidly stalking it's prey. MGM flirts shamelessly with sub-plots, female neighbors, adjunct tangents & characters along the way.
Yet he always returns slightly bamboozled reader to the main scent of the story & backhandedly resolves plot tension. It seems so easy until you try it yourself. Kudos.
Another fantastic story from the great author with a slightly twisted mind. Only MGM could keep this from becoming a bad neighbor revenge story. Plus he has setup a future story involving Sammi, what a twisted mind he has. Thanks for writing.
I still see your comments on my stories so I am not sure what is happening. Thanks, and pro or con, always appreciated.
To Jim? What is this "slightly twisted" stuff? I am WAY more twisted than just slightly.
Lol.
Thanks,
MGM