All Comments on 'Was It Dad or Mom Ch. 02'

I loved it and found the writing to be very good along with the edit.

Thanks for the good story.

This was a pretty good story, but it was dragged down--esp. chapter 1--by the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. They were very distracting.

I hope the future involves bringing the next generation into the incestuous fold.

I liked the story until u got to where he had his cock pierced, it turned me cold. I didn't even finish it. I think the story was better without it.

Must admit, was not sure of the significance of the cock piercing - it was a random input with no basis.