All Comments on 'Watch and Learn'

by Archer2050

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levanyoblevanyobalmost 19 years ago
Great!

Absolutely fantastic! Please submit a follow up preferably slower in pace with more focus on Penny's curves.

Don1028Don1028over 18 years ago
Very good plot line

Would have been happier with less use of the F word early on. Would have made it more effective later. Plot also assumes that reader knows history which I don't know.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Very well written

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
autum

did autum & penny meet?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
epic

that was... epic.

usasoldiernusasoldiernover 10 years ago
Good stuff

Stories like this are nearly always hot and this was no exception.

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