All Comments on 'Watching My Son'

by MarleeM

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
A Hot Story

Can't wait til you are doing more than just watching. The webcam connection could be tricky to pull off. Too easy to recognize his mother's body on camera. Maybe a visit to his room would be called for.lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
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Too twisted, Marlee. Try realism.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice story

Looking forward to more episodes of this continuing adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful

I wouldn't have thought this was my kind of story, but you write so well and describe it so sexily that I really loved it. Thanks Marlee and keep writing.

cacowboy48cacowboy48almost 14 years ago
Another hot chapter

Loved it Marlee, and can't wait for your next chapter to see where this goes next. I'm hoping it will progress to a physical contact between mom and son. Again loved it and look forward to the next one.

Gemini552Gemini552almost 14 years ago
Seductive

Loved your story. Hope there is more activity from Mother/Son. Very HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Another Great Chapter

I've been eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and you didn't disappoint. Thanks for another great installment of this wonderful series. You are a very gifted writer. This story continues to be very erotic and readable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
dumb writer

most writers with a brain give the chapters of a series the same name and number them so as not to confuse the readers and so the readers don't have to search to find the other chapters and try to figure out what order they should be read in stop sitting on your brain and rename all your stories properly

SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR STORIES AND RESPECT FOR THE READERS YOU HAVE TO EARN RESPECT SO FAR YOU HAVEN'T

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a little different

...from the usual "approach" in mother/son incest stories, and very well constructed...just slow and teasing enough, with great dialogue. I've bookmarked you Marlee, and will be looking for your next story, and the ones after that. Thanks!

cookie404cookie404over 13 years ago
Read all four (in order) twasn't hard to figure out.

Hi ! Nicely done. Think you kept the interest peaked. I hope Chapter 5 will be along shortly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I Am Very Wet!

Wet and fingering myself - going to go cum now.

xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great series

I just read all four parts of this story. It is great. I can't wait to read part 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The stuff dreams are made of

My cock is so hard, damn near came right here at the pc. Hot ain't the word for it. Good story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Looking forward to Chapter 5

Mom in a bikini. Mom with red lipstick. Mom enjoying herself going further than she can imagine. Only a matter of time before she is discovered!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

On the net. Well done and different. I will be waiting for your next chapter.

lpmich66lpmich66over 12 years ago
nice!

wow...quite a read .... keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Mom and Pantyhose

Will Mom wear pantyhose without panties and flash?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
inticing want more

keep it up, continue let her get pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more

is there more to this story if so could please writ it love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
agree

i must say that i hope there is more 2 this story would like 2 read how mom tells her son it was her he was talking 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
moms panties and pantyhose

Hope they have pantie and pantyhose sex in the next one like he said .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
"The stuff dreams are made of" indeed

That's what one reader called the likely trajectory of this fine story, and it sure is the dream of lots and lots of boys. A son's penis coming closer and closer to his own mother's vagina. That unique in all the world hole between his mother's legs, the same wonderful hairy hole he came out of. For plenty of sons, who knows down deep maybe every last one of them, there's something very special about their own mother's cunt. It's where their whole life-story started, their own damn birth canal. For them, it's the most beautiful anything there is. They dream of the soft hairs that surround it, its lovely planes and indentations, that thrilling crease, and the sharp musky aroma that rises up for them to inhale deep into their young lungs, their own mother's cunt-smell. Nothing can ever get them nearly as hard as their own mommy's vagina. Some sons get so hard their young cock practically busts out of their pants. Some even cream their shorts just whispering the words to the words to themselves, "my mother's cunt," "my own mother's cunthole," "my mommy's fuckhole, "mom's twat," "my mommy's warm wet ever-loving twat," "the twat I came out of," and similar boyish endearments. The possibilities are endless when a son and his mother come together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keep it going

Have them become online pantie and pantyhose lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Lets have more please

Online masturbating Rocks. Have her tell him what to do with her panties and pantyhose.

TabooBroSonTabooBroSonalmost 8 years ago
Incredible Detail

Even if not every element was my cup of pervy tea, it was so well written and so detailed. Very erotic, thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pantie storie lover

I love mom son pantie masturbating stories like this

donnaelisa25donnaelisa25over 7 years ago
Mmmmm Mum

It was so hot and very well written, i had my hand in my panties reading the story. Thanks xxxooo

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago

that was another great chapter. I loved the seduction.

socalchris951socalchris951over 4 years ago
best yet!

Incredibly hot! Especially loved the part where you told your son how much you loved feeling a cock getting hard in your mouth. Very erotic!

desikdesikabout 4 years ago
best

if a story makes me hard then it's a good one!!!keep up with great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story but I wanted her to do something with son

Horing1Horing110 months ago

HORNY ONE

Your story brings memories of mom getting dressed for work with me watching her in front of the mirror. The way she pulled her panties to fit between her legs to show her cameltoe bulge, my cock erect from pure lust

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