All Comments on 'Water Nymphs Pt. 02'

Thank you for finishing the story. Well written, as always.

I agree with Rocket. Happy holidays. Thanks.

Almost missed it with the category change. Wish authors would keep story lines in same category. That's my rant. Keep up the great work!!

Ditto, Great ending for a great adventure story. Maybe they should turn their deserted island into a resort. That would be a fun story. Five Stars!

Loved the plot, loved the characters, loved the sex. Great job!

Great story with a fantastic ending!

OK, so it’s not the deepest plot, but it’s well-written and enjoyable. I’m glad you found time to finish it up.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

I’ll tell you what, if you’re a man and that story didn’t put a little smile on your face, I feel for you. Sure, it’s not “high-brow” literature but it was a very entertaining read. I hated to see it end.

Crazy adventure! Thanks!

5 stars - I really really like this story.

Having my own Caribbean Island is my favorite fantasy.

Sharing it with several much younger sweet women would be so much better.

Yes, I am also a veteran, so my island would be very well defended.

No one would be able to get within 5 miles of the place without me be aware of it and well prepared.

fun read

Great story my friend. Nearly on a par with DTiverson. Todd172 and Saddletramp💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💫

Damn - that was good, but there were only two chapters............

Why are so many good stories far too short ?

Well worth 5 Stars !

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