All Comments on 'Water Park Fun Ch. 03 - The Surprise'

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beanburner69beanburner69almost 4 years ago
highly recommed

It's took along time for you to get back to this story. thank you, liked it a lot. Hope it dosen't take 2 years for the next, @ 72 I'm on borrowed time.

GrindleGrindlealmost 4 years ago
Hopefully more soon.

Would be nice to see a continuation somewhat sooner than the last.

Cal59Cal59almost 4 years ago
Thanks

Enjoyed that instalment, please try to not make us wait for another 2 years!

cma68cma68almost 4 years ago

Great story - one of my favorites. More chapters, please!

mysensualsecretsmysensualsecretsalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic romance

All good things take time. All things come to he who waits. Thanks for another great installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story --- so far

Please continue this story --- it is fantastic, so far. It could develop into a really great finish with a few additional chapters. Thank you so much for this, to date.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

Ten minutes is definitely not a few. Why'd it take her so long just to change into some Lingerie? The dad knocking almost made me jump as well lmao xD

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