All Comments on 'Water Park Surprise'

Highly improbable story, but exciting as possible. More importantly, your story was very well written and erotic. Please consider a sequel to this "5" one. Thank you.

but well done anyway

This writer had many scenarios....but this erotic story is the one he chose.......Definitely quite a tale....about this guy being able to "nail".... those two lovely "tails'........Next chapter I imagine we'll see.....a variety of pairings, maybe even a count of three....in what I expect is another sexy fantasy....because I doubt it is based on reality....LOL...Mother, daughter,her friend, and his wife...will make for him a wild sex life....but only if none of them causes any strife..........Waiting to read.....where and into whom he deposits his "seed".....and how he does the deed.........3/29

Very exciting and made me very horny! Can't wait till there is a chapter 2.

That you will ever be likely to know gets that lucky - that is what they call a fantasy story rofl -

Too much fun for words

This needs chapter two!

If only me :(.