All Comments on 'We All Watched Each Other'

erotic. a drunk, violant asshole raping his wife as main story. really nice taste you got.

where do you people live so i can make sure i never go there.

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What a mindless creep you are for thinking and writing such filth. It shows what kind of a moron you are. Why don't you crawl back under that rock you crawled out. You're nothing but a parasite. Cheers.

separate their lives from a fictional story. One of the problems with LW stories is new ideas. There are none! We usually have to settle for re-working the same old ideas in order to come up with a new story. I think you have taken some old themes (adultery, "best" friends, cuckold cream pie, caught on video and revenge) and turned it entirely around & told it from an entirely new point of view. Whether you like this kind of story or not, anyone who has tried to write one has to appreciate how clever this plot is constructed. Well done!

The loving wives wankers... What a sad and sorry bunch (at least many of the vocal anonymous ones) who have their own demented view of morality. It's a fucking story you tools. No wonder your wives dumped your sorry asses and you're stuck home getting carpel tunnel. Fiction - look it up in the dictionary. Every time I see a story getting ripped in the feedback portal I check it out, and usually the comments are misdirected. Get a grip - not that grip.

A nice twist on some common themes. Cleverly and skillfully done.

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Nice idea.

...an old format.Anyone who uses the term "wanker", is one. And isn't it funny the crap that comes out of the mouths of readers that get off on this shit?

usually I can agree with you. But this WAS a clever twist on an old format. Sorry that you can't see it due to tunnel view. Thanks writer - I liked the 'turned tables' idea.

why did Donna shave her overflowing pit hair

You pulled punches, like not having the kids get working videos. They should have known what a cheating slut their mother was.

Clearly the husband would have come after the story teller beyond the video. He was an angry cuckolded mam. He would have gotten some blood for what they did to him. You had him pack up and leave to easily.

She didn't really suffer anything but her husband reclaiming his wife's body and losing some money. She betrayed the husband and you let her off very lightly.

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What a mess relationships can become. Donna and Mikes marriage died years ago. Hate and indifference took the place of love and caring.

Donnas with her old love. Sad story with a good ending.

Well done

Chilley

reminded you to much of your dead ex wife's sex with the fleet I guess.