by shavedkitty23
Your story has a lovely basis, the forbidden taboo between son-in-law, cheating with his wife's mother is delicious. Maybe a bit more background on how the characters ended up where they did, would have added a bit more eroticsm to the plot, as would a brief physical description of them including their ages, but it certainly wasn't a bad story. I appreciate the time it takes to create a piece of writing, and to have feedback from the eejit that just posted can be frustrating, but please have the strength to ignore it...
Ian XX
This story is awesome. I would love to hear more. It is funny that many people are the worst critics while they hide behind anonymous. Keep up the good work.
...and welcome to the Literotica Community. My first MIL liked me better than her daughter did, and I've often wondered what it would have been like to "do" her -- or be "done" by her! But I was young and oblivious and now it's too late. I hope you write some more.
That is a really erotic thought of him fucking his wife's mother in the ass. Perhaps he can get her pussy the next time they fuck.
All he has to do is get his wife drunk and passed out, and then fuck her mother, and hopefully fill her pussy with his cum.
Thanks for the read
If you can not tell whether you are in a woman's ass or pussy. Other than that it was a good story. I rated it a 4*.
Reminded me of me and my MIL. I was fortunate enough to have a five year affair, meeting every couple months for hot steamy sex. Gawd I loved that woman!