All Comments on 'We Were Just Teenagers Scenario 02'

who gives two different stories about the same people doing the same thing the same title you can't have two first times with the same person if you wrote one as a dream then it would be ok but to write them both as if they really happened makes it stupid did you even think before you posted this do a rewrite and make one a dream or change the names in one

DBRS

The clue is in the name (scenerio 2). Its one of many possible scenes or situations.

Don't fret, DS. I daresay most of us understood your intent. I thought this was a nice smutty yarn. I think your writing slid up a notch in the second version too. Carry on. :)

-Paco

Do you think you're the 1 to talk since you read both scenarios? I don't! I may be anonymous, too, but I'm no hypocrite.

Great build up although I thought it finished off a bit quick. I like the idea of different scenarios, keep it up (no pun intended)

Sweet story.

Nice build up and a good coupling of the two of them.

I want to read more of what they did after they went home, and hope that they still stay as close as they were at the lake.

Thanks for the read.

Really cool stories. Follow-up adventures would be great with so many possibilities. I would be a loyal reader of future adventures.

This is a lovely story. Got me hard as well

either change the names or delete this crap. IF you had been smart (which you have already proven you aren't) you would have posted this as a different story with different characters or at the very least made one a dream. such a waste of space and time no wonder you have such low ratings.

Great writing, great characters. Keep it up. =)

Noice

Really love this alternate take on the original. Both are good in their own way.

2nd read. 5* the first time, and agree this time. Really like the sense of pent up lust in two teens, used to getting their sexual needs met, but forced by circumstances and social taboos into suppressing their desires. Then the dam gave way! Oh, didn't it?