by HeyAll
As I have aged and enjoyed candid conversations with close friends and relatives, I find a lot of them have partaken in the forbidden fruits or lament having had the opportunity in the past without doing so. I have one set of close friends (brother/sister) that now live together as older man/wife...she reverted to her maiden name! Both have children from prior marriages and the children seem to be ok with things.
I sure would love for you to carry on this great story and tell the rest of the tale of their online shows , plus how they became lovers that couldn't live apart from each other.
You could also include that they let their perants know about their love affair and that they want to be together for life.
You've set the stage, and even included a teaser. I definitely would like to read more about the siblings and what they get up to.
I am with the others who want more. He needs to get into her ass instead of a dildo.
Great stuff as usual... hopefully there are more chapters to come!
At least one sequel would be good, if you want to, of course. No suggestions, I'm sure you have good ideas of your own.
Best story ive read in a long while. You didnt wait too long to get to the good stuff. It was very realistic and relatable. Please dont stop writing, for you have serious talent.
A sequel would be great and I really enjoyed your story and like someone said before me one of the best stories I've read as of lately you should keep writing!!
A great story. A good build up to the action and a tantalizing tease of more adventures to come. Perhaps a little bondage is needed next?
Please keep writing.
Love the story because of the dude's pretty realistic attitude towards everything. The sister was clearly plotting to fuck him from day one, the suggestive writing made that clear. He's dialogue and reactions to her aggressive advances seemed really believable , it was easy to imagine a guy in that situation being torn between the social taboo and the financial/sexual benefits. Also, I was glad there was no outrageous description of his cock size. If the story is about a normal dude he should have a normal cock in most cases so I was a relief to see that here.
One nit pick could be that the sister is overly keen to jump straight into sex in their first show. With him being so reluctant I thought she work up to it a little slower than she did but I guess the story paints her as an assertive nympho. Keep up the good work!
Though I must say <sloopb> suggestion gets my full support.
Love a bit of bondage in there too.
Yes, a sequel is needed. Possible ideas: Anal with sister. Threesome (M/F/F or M/F/Trans) with sister's "modeling" friend.
A good story.
I rather liked it.
The idea of the couple further exploring their sexuality together is good but I really fail to see why some on here always insist on bondage and the inclusion of multiple partners.
Why cannot they expand into a loving relationship? There are far too few love brother/sister stories on here. Maybe add in that the sister only started caming after she saw her brothers add. Only using it from day one as a way to seduce him. Taking that additional month to build a small fan base so it would see more legit to him.
nice little fantasy. I've often wondered where the 'stunt cocks' in some of the cam girls' vids/rooms come from. And how extra kinky it would be if they were brother/sister. Might there be a sequel?
One of your hottest stories so far! Absolutely love it, and can't wait to read more. :) Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.
Am I the only one that wants- no, needs a sequel? Absolutely incredible.
That was a great story, but you can't leave it there, it deserves another chapter or two.
Good story line, good characters, plenty of scope for a whole lot more.
Please !
Marvelous presentation, not seen many stories like this hence the 5 Star.
Outstanding and unique storyline and character build up and development. This tale had such a realistic overtone to it! All the detailed content was so well immersed in detail... such as the raw emotions and erotic sex scenes!
I can't believe this but you have done it again. As I go down the list the stories get better and better, if that is possible ?? THANK YOU.
Excellent story! I'm sure the next chapter will be even better. I love the fast, but definitely not rushed, buildup. Keep up the good work!
Loved it all ,can't wait for the next chapters,😍😍
PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A PART 2 TO THIS. This was an amazing story to read and I don't want but NEED more from him and Ellary
for 2nd & maybe 3rd parts. Bet they'd make major cash if their audience knew they were watching incest...!!!
Another Grand Slam Home Run hit out of the park. What more can I say.
very GOOD believable story. please have a part two and start from the shower both had together and the following sleep together naked and waking up to a welcome morning fuck before breakfast"
Or I could reread this HOT story! Truly a TURN ON - what a beginning and pure joy for both!!
The landlord is greedy. But that was nice are you going to add a few more to wedcam sister
Involves a butt plug and her little brother fucking her 'til he cums inside her pussy.
There could also be a request for Anal Sex and another where Ellary is suspended by ropes, attached by nipple clips and a clit clip. These are only suggestions. It's YOUR call.
we NEED more chapters of this story line !!!! GREAT story !!!!
I'm speechless. What a fantastic story, I love the "Thank you greedy landlord" line, it added that bit of humor these stories need. Thank you for another entertaining story.
Your story was hot, well written, and I liked the small mystery at the end. Maybe Ellary has another brother tucked away somewhere, and they'll have a threesome? Anyway, obviously a five star story. -- JB Edwards
9 times out 10 you'll crash and burn, ruin the story......
What a great storyline bringing a brother and sister together in sexual situation that was really really hot. The author is still publishing on Lit so maybe he would give us the readers more of this well written tale. Well done 5+++stars.
Great story and believable as well. My one suggestion is to continue the story in a series format.
(1/3/2022) This was an enjoyable read. You don’t seem to do stories with chapters so I won’t ask. I think it would be rude not to, at least, send their landlord a fruit basket.
Oh, damn. What a story. Loved it to the Nth degree. What happens tomorrow night with the additional promises? . . . .
Extremely hot and — strangely — quite realistic. I mean I know it’s fiction but something like that could have happened. I can’t imagine my sister doing anything remotely like that now but… thinking back in time to thirty years ago, when I was 18 and my sister was 20, if webcams and all of that had existed then (the internet was in its infancy in 1994) I can very easily imagine her doing something like that, and getting me involved as well.