All Comments on 'Wedding Daze'

love to read more of jeff and donnas incest

I do hope so. I'm hooked.

the best part of incest stories is the long slow build up that leads the characters to cross that uncrossable line, and this story was literally dripping with it. the passion, emotion and conflict between mom and son was tangible, and the payoff sex was primal, erotic and real. 5*s for sure!

Super start to a tale of conquest and discovery!

Great story, loved it. And you're a great writer as well, you managed to fit enough story in two pages, in what would usually take me four... and still wrote a smoking hot story!

5 stars.

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point! Can't wait until the next chapter.

Looking forward to part 2. Hope father gets caught with some young thing by mother and son.

A great story and I certainly hope we read more about this mother and son. I loved the slow buildup, the moment many sons recall with clarity, the moment the son sees his mother as a sexual being. In this story the moment leads to the son giving his mother the attention she craves and mother and son feed off one another. Mom chooses her swimwear to please her son not her husband, and her son lusts for his mother not even noticing the teen girls by the pool that distract dad. I found it both ironic and hot that as dad is distracted by the pool his son usurps him and back in the hotel room mom spreads her married thighs and allows her son to mount. I love the descriptions of pure lust as the mom and son rutt like wild animals having the best sex of their lives and becoming addicted to the siren call of the incest orgasm. Not being planned the son mounts his mother without a condom, taking his mother the way nature intended until he roars in orgasm and seeds his mothers fertile womb. I hope to read more about this loving mother and son as the son takes his mother over and over again. As indicated in the story Mom and son are now addicted to the power of the incest orgasm. As they fuck with ever increasing frequency mom and son will find it impossible to go more than a few days without making love. When dad goes away on business the son will take his rightful place in the masterbedroom between his mother thighs. After months of constant sex and the son filling his mother with seed hundreds of times, eventually mom will announce her pregnancy. The son will beam with pride as his own mother slips from her marital bed in the middle of the night, walks down the hall, and goes into her son's room locking the door behind her. Once inside mom will remove her robe exposing her swollen breasts and belly to her son. Mom and son will once again lock in an embrace as the son slides up behind his mother, slides his rock hard manhood into his mother, cups her breasts and starts the now familiar rythmic dance with his mother. I hope to read more about this couple

It seems ro me there should be another chapter or 2. This is a great story for more add on chapters. Looking forward to it.

Will dad ever find out?? , will dad get the waitresses number??, or will he try for the two young girles??, or will he catch jeff and mom fucking??. Or will mom catch dad banging the waitress?. An then the shit hits the fan. PLEASE keep this story going, it was a fun read thanks

Really enjoyed your narrative. Maybe more details on their sex thing would make this even better.

I really got into this story , and await the next chapter/s there are many variables in which this story can continue and i hope if you do write them you do it with the style you wrote this one....excellent.

I just love it when dad is clueless about what is going on between his wife and son. But you set up a situation for dad to go on his own sexual odyssey and that is really value added!

Nicely written.

The old man should have got the phone number... they went home.... husband went to work and then his son re-stretched his wife's vagina and spent seven hours building callouses around her cunt opening and fucking her brains out.

I gave it four instead of five stars because the story still needs to be finished.

I enjoyed all of it but the detail that the two-hour drive was supposedly so tiring. A two-hour drive is nothing--maybe you meant ten hours?

Thhis story just begs for more chapters . It has been set up the chapter describing the sex between Jeff and Donna as something they could never shake , and it was the best sex that either on of them would ever have . The father is out looking for other conquests and has little or no interest with his wife . The story has been set all that remains is to be told . I would appreciate a more detailed story describing the happiness and love between Jeff and his mother .

"to suddenly be able to see so much of his own mother and to realize that she was just as beautiful on the outside as he had always known she was on the inside"

Nice introduction to the characters. Well defined emotional descriptions. Exciting and hot sex! Leaves one hoping for more.

The makeing out , and the teaseing ,that was the best part. They took there time, GOD only knows how long it would take before they blew up. Lucky for the wedding, and that hotel room..good read.

Good read. Well done. Enticingly provocative.

Hot date while Adam is at the Stag Do. Leave the wedding early for more fun. Drunk Adam gets sloppy seconds, but doesn't finish before passing out. Donna gets to bear her own grandchildren. Adam leaves for a waitress.

Hot as hell, and extremely good writing! Five stars only because there’s not 10 stars to be had. More please?

That was certainly very hot but I thought they would get together at the wedding. I so want more.

Mom should get pregnant. The thought of a teen boy knocking up his mom is very erotic.

Need a sequel

Need more to the story. Otherwise it was good.

All that crap about not committing adultery, and then falling hook, line, and sinker into it. Like all American principles, there are none.

Characters that don't even qualifu as caricatures. Just sock puppets of a confused writer's mind.

That was Hot! And oh so realistic. Gave me the relief I needed as I sit here looking out at my mom washing the windows in her braless tight top. Fuck. I better read it again.

(1/3/2023) Yup..., this was a hot enjoyable read. Well written, well done.

Nice story. Either I'm missing another page, or so, or it ended rather abruptly...

@theoldstud it was ended abruptly though it could have used more detail on the sex and a little more build up

Hot

Wife sees husband chatting to 2 teenage girls. Normal reaction: anger and jealousy, immediate desire to get over there and stake claim to her man. Her: doesn't even pay it any attention. That just doesn't track with established female behaviour. Of course, the husband turns out to be a sleaze that would cheat at the first chance he can get if he thinks he can get away with it. It's a shame there was no drama in this one, like him discovering them or at least becoming suspicious. Rather vanilla.