by HeyAll
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I think the tension of the situation made that hotter than I expected. Well written, as usual.
Great story. Nice twist at the end as I expected Nicole to have to service the mother.
You know what's blowing my mind about this one?
I mean, besides the refreshingly brief storytelling, the sweltering hot, edge of your seat sex and the fact that you still have a whole, coherent, satisfying story woven through all that?(Good work, by the way!)
No, what blows my mind is the mother getting her off works on so many levels! She's a momma bear so she's gonna be a domme and a bitch but she's also a mother and a lady and, on some level, she's probably knows how close this was to going off the rails. It feels like, in her own haughty and Machaiavellian way, she's expressing gratitude for all her good work, a little indulgence for the help hmmm? I mean, her daughter got that libertine attitude from somewhere!
And the fact that I can infer all that from basically a one paragraph sex scene, shows how well you've written this story! It doesn't just convey the information that it wants, it stimulates the mind and activates the imagination in ways I didn't expect! 5 stars isn't enough, but what's what you're getting!
huh well that was hot
I liked the nonchalant groom won't mind part. I think a lot of stories add that detail, but for some reason, it just worked here
Now that is how to start a wedding. Fun cums for all. Well done well played. Cheers
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