All Comments on 'Wedding Reception'

Well-written with sweet, likable characters, plenty of dialogue, just enough plot, hot sex not "by the numbers".

Not realistic and boring.

Real good story. Very refreshing in it's honesty and style. This is my first reading of your work and will read more. Thanks for your efforts and good luck.

Fine intro. Waiting for more. Thanks.

Looking forward to see where this goes, especially since I'm also a senior.

To the anonymous commenter who said this story is not realistic and boring. It is fantasy and you were warned that it dealt with seniors, sorry if you feel that senior having sex is boring, but we do.

To the two other anonymous commenters who indicated they want more. I decide to add more to stories that get comments asking for more, plus a high overall rating. This being the first day this story is public, it's too early to see what the overall rating will be.

Enjoyable story!

5

*****Wedding are good hookup places for the young and mature. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

Great fantasy for old people, of which I am one, and I'd love to believe this was normal and routine. Thanks for helping me believe.

I am glad that Mark was able to rise to the occasion

Another great story. I enjoy the mature theme as that is who I am. Ignore the nay sayer. This was realistic. I’ve had a similar experience, where I met a mutuel lady who was kink curious, but never had done any of it. It how I started down this path.

Can't wait to read more!

Very enjoyable. Just enough buildup. If you continue I hope you become just slightly more explicit. Nice work.

Where is the next chapter???? She still needs a spanking! She can take the flogger, no problem!

Chrissy