by Imstillfun
The story was good but the woman was reckless. Total stranger, no condom, risky.
But a hot story.
@watcherRob - hey, it's fiction. Sure, in real life no condom would be risky, the same as being fucked naked on a balcony is risky, but even in real life people get caught up in the moment and the risk can even add to the excitement. In real life she would probably not even have been on the pill under the circumstances.
The beauty of fiction is that risks only matter if the author wants them to matter!
I loved the sexy romantic buildup to the sex scenes.
Anyone who's worked a hotel knows the drill!
Ah, but he forgot the tip!
Once again you hit a homerun with your slow buildup. More writers should realize that the sexiness comes from the anticipation. Thanks!
You packed a lot of living into a very short story. Hot AF, very well done!
I like this couple, and I'm glad they have a future together.
I am shocked that this woman didn’t have a husband at home waiting for a report. But even though the lady was single and I think the man was single as well the no condom risky location criticism had to be made.
Very hot story especially her experiencing sexual first, especially getting naked in a semi public space.
Cute short story. This is what women dream of and falling in love. I liked it. Reminded me of how I used to be. Silly how life can change. Well keep these sexy and sweet stories cumming. Nicely done.
Hot as hell. Another story of yours that is included in favorite stories.