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m1km1n30m1km1n309 months ago

The weekend with Garry and the college guys was super sexy. Loved it. I wish the story was just about that and Jordan’s urge to make a young man he’d met before, Clifford, a bigger presence in his life.

Also would have line a deep dive into his relationship with Garry. It was actually touching when he described them as desperate for each other knowing it could end for them at any moment.

Jordan clearly can not stand any of the women he sleeps with. He’s demeaning to all and degrades Becky by sleeping with her own child in her home immediately after sleeping with her. He came off as such an shallow, arrogant asshat I started to think of him as his most desirable body part, not as a person.

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