by mejau71
i can't wait for the next part of this story. it is soooo hot !!!
great continuation, please hurry with the next chapter.
Quite possibly the best story I have ever read on Literotica. Wow...so hot!
that was hot. my heads still ringing after reading that story. it made me feel like i was right there with them. please finish this story. bravo to you!
mejau71, is one of if not the best writer of erotica that I have read.
Captures the mood, the love. the lust so perfectly.
Bravo!
the author is pretty like hell, too! (nothing against or for you, Mejau71 --- but since you have your pic on, I just wanted to make that smart alec comment)
of all the stories I've come across, there's only one other that's very similar to Mejau's,,, so similar in fact I first thought they're the same; but if both authors got their ideas from orginality, then bravo to both; they are both extremely erotic stories, with little or no degradation, humiliation, and nastiness beyond extreme eroticism,,,
If you can't get turned on by this story . . . Give it up, YOUR DEAD ! An excellent Story. I can't wait for the continuation. You are a very foxy looking woman and a great writer.
Yeessyeeeessssyeeeeeeeess ! I don't know if that exist but i have had my first orgasm of my brain. You are beautiful in all and i wait the next chapter. Kisses
Well-written and spell-binding. I think that we're all ready for more...........please.
The story was well written with the proper payoff at the end. All the elements of a good story were present and ably used.
Wow ! What an amazing story. One of the best on Literotica, in my opinion. I hope you will write more mom/son stories. You do it so well.
There's a lot more than just erotic sex in this story, it's also about love and bringing two souls together into being one.
Very sweet and yet wildly erotic sex between the mother and her chosen mate, the one she wanted to impregnate her and give her a life in her womb.
Fantastic work and even though the author wrote the story quite a while ago, perhaps he will favor us with more of his wonderful work.
why didn't you ever finish it? no stars. if you finish it its a 5. i know you're still writing - even though this story hasn't been added to in years. so please finish it. i'm tempted to give you 1 stars on everything new you write until this is complete!
I love the story and that mom and son are together and pregnant. But Victoria is why they are and is a good person I'd hate for her to just be forgotten. She doesn't have to be involved but it would be nice to know what happened to her and that she finds love too.
O yeah. Make that baby u mother fucker.....cannot wait for more chapters. U R on my watch list.
keep writing. she needs to screaming in pain as she gives birth to his children!