All Comments on 'Welcome Home, Soldier'

by Sir_Erotica

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epiphany65epiphany65over 16 years ago
Excellent!

I loved the pacing and interaction between the siblings. The fact that it didn't have a predictable ending made it even better. But please don't leave us hanging -- write more!

Adamus76Adamus76over 16 years ago
Super!

Great story man, you handled the wounded soldier plot very well without overdoing it. Very stylish and respectful. Hope to read more about this fellow and his sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Now, THAT is erotica!

keairankeairanover 16 years ago
Good, but

Alright, originally the sister was 19 at the beginning, and then she was able to go into a bar and get damn near plastered. something doesn't quite add up here if they are from the US

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Outstanding

Please continue!

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Hot Tale!

Keep it going. Give us a sequel.

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaover 16 years ago
Some people would absolutely freak...

...if they read this story, but you can't tell me things like this haven't really happened. Hot, well written and oddly touching. Well done. Best, Ken

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice plot but-Not really very well done

It needed much more buildup and more detail in handling sensitive areas

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good, but a bit rushed

And as someone else mentioned, if the sister is 19 years old, she's underage to be going drinking in bars. She also seems a pretty heavy drinker for one so young.<br><br>

What was missing for me was more detail about what he was feeling. He seemed to take his sister jacking him off too easily in stride.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story

That was hot. Please continue. For those commenting about the sister's age: At the beginning it said he came home to Germany. I'm guessing they have different rules there.

hm10s4hm10s4about 14 years ago

hope there is going to be more to the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
5 Fucking stars! Yeah!

I want more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
my loving big sis

my married sister is 10 years older than me i was going to afgan she geve me a small prese she said dont open it untill i got there it so i can remember her i open it it was nude picture of he and a red dirty g string witha note thi will keep your mine off the war when u get back i will geve wat was in those niks as it was i was in afgan 3 months i got hurt ann came home sis got me out of hospital she said i was not going home i am staying with her i ask what about her hubby he wont mine she said when her hubby came hohe that evening he ask my sis if she made the spear room she said yes after supper he said i amgoing to bed we watch tv for abit when sis ter said let me help u with u bath sis got in with me then took me to bed her bed she said john is in the spear room he said i must look after u in the nite so i am going to she fuck me all nite and ever day for the last 6 month john get his bit in the evening and weekends

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

Really sweet, do continue! Waiting for more chapters, pllleeeaaase

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What a waste.

I was hoping this would continue but I just noticed the date.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
?

he certainly could hold a glass, just use both hands idiot!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 1 year ago

What a shame your not writing any more. That is a cracking tale.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 1 year ago

A lot of build up to nothing. Kind of a let down.

Aussie1951Aussie19519 months ago
Oldpantythief

Your comment as spot on ⭐️⭐️

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

For God's sake don't stop now. Let's see how she is going to fuck him what with his being in his condition and all . . . .

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