by Sir_Erotica
I loved the pacing and interaction between the siblings. The fact that it didn't have a predictable ending made it even better. But please don't leave us hanging -- write more!
Great story man, you handled the wounded soldier plot very well without overdoing it. Very stylish and respectful. Hope to read more about this fellow and his sister.
Alright, originally the sister was 19 at the beginning, and then she was able to go into a bar and get damn near plastered. something doesn't quite add up here if they are from the US
...if they read this story, but you can't tell me things like this haven't really happened. Hot, well written and oddly touching. Well done. Best, Ken
It needed much more buildup and more detail in handling sensitive areas
And as someone else mentioned, if the sister is 19 years old, she's underage to be going drinking in bars. She also seems a pretty heavy drinker for one so young.<br><br>
What was missing for me was more detail about what he was feeling. He seemed to take his sister jacking him off too easily in stride.
That was hot. Please continue. For those commenting about the sister's age: At the beginning it said he came home to Germany. I'm guessing they have different rules there.
my married sister is 10 years older than me i was going to afgan she geve me a small prese she said dont open it untill i got there it so i can remember her i open it it was nude picture of he and a red dirty g string witha note thi will keep your mine off the war when u get back i will geve wat was in those niks as it was i was in afgan 3 months i got hurt ann came home sis got me out of hospital she said i was not going home i am staying with her i ask what about her hubby he wont mine she said when her hubby came hohe that evening he ask my sis if she made the spear room she said yes after supper he said i amgoing to bed we watch tv for abit when sis ter said let me help u with u bath sis got in with me then took me to bed her bed she said john is in the spear room he said i must look after u in the nite so i am going to she fuck me all nite and ever day for the last 6 month john get his bit in the evening and weekends
I was hoping this would continue but I just noticed the date.
For God's sake don't stop now. Let's see how she is going to fuck him what with his being in his condition and all . . . .