by Argonaut_1975
Well crafted piece of erotica that is fun to read and fun to fantasize about it being real. The description is well done and the pace is perfect. Your usage of certain words to describe fucking is very creative and adds to the piece. I hope that we see many stories cumming from your talented and creative mind.
I tried to convey the difference in the way he treated each girl and it seems to have come across.
Why is a person such as yourself, with your obvious writing talent and professionalism, not actively engaged in the Adult Film industry???
Altho we have been chat buddies for 2+ years, I was not aware the true extent of your writing abilities.
I believe u have found your "calling."
The Adult Film industry awaits u.