All Comments on 'Werewolf at Heart'

I love where this story is going. I hope it is just the beginning. I cant wait to see what happens next.

you took a common plot of alpha male werewolf and female human and made it into something new and more importantly you made it into something real, she wasn't drop dead good looking and though there was an attraction it wasn't love at first sniff. she had real life problems, she seems normal and nothing was rushed. i like it a lot so far and can't wait to see were it goes. keep it up, hope you keep on writing.

I'm glad Carly wasn't a drop-dead, gorgeous model - rather a seemingly ordinary woman thrust into extraordinary circumstances. Great start - looking forward to what happens next - and Jack, with his perceptive observations, is a keeper!

Great story. Hope you continue it. Thanks.

Very good beginning. Would love to read more.

And a huge thank you for not following the usual 'hot, busty gorgeous babe/overly muscled, full of himself Alpha who feel an overwhelming lust and screw in the lavatory on the flight' story. This has believable characters and will, hopefully, be enjoyable.

More please 😜

This was a great start, keep it up I can't wait for more.

I can't wait for more ,hopefully a lot more .

Stephen J

I hope Carly keep in contact with Blake from time to time. There isn't nothing wrong with being friends with him. She is using the kids as an excuse. Although, I can understand why she feels as she does. I got a feeling she would use some other excuse to avoid Blake even if she didn't have the kids.

Would love to see more.

Please post more

I love the way your starting this story, can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Love the build up. Please post more soon..

You have baited your hook enticingly. Interesting plot, characters we are already invested in and a cliff hanger to seal the deal. A round of applause for you.

I have to agree with Anonymous on 9/25. You baited us and the characters and plot is awesome. Please give us more. Waiting impatiently!

You have an amazing ability of leaving your audience craving for more. Your work is wonderful, if you were published I would be a devoted fan.

Glad there's more so I don't have to wait!

I just loved that you painted Carly as someone Blake would never ever look at. Describing her as unappealing in every way, including the fact that she had two kids which would be another off putting characteristic, was an excellent idea.

I will read further and hope to continue to be impressed with your originality.

It does not let me vote a second time ,but I would have given it another 5 stars . I am loving it the second time through.

Stephen J

Ah crap!!!! Cliffhanger!!! Oh bonus - more chapters!

Nothing posted in more than a year people. Unfinished story as it stands.

NO ending,so read if you want to make up your own ending,,good story,,just waste of time,

This is another unfinished story.

The writing was really good, but don't waste your time.

Gotta thank Anonymous for the heads-up. Had just finished a series only to find that it was incomplete. Thank you.

...it just leaves the end open to how you wish to imagine it will be.

If the author is still alive, I hope they come back to this and complete it.

Last posting was 5 years ago,,so,very doubtful there will be an ending,,it was a good one,,