by Dreamthiev
That was one of the best stories I have read here I loved it can't wait for more!!!!
Please do not make us wait long for the next chapter! I cant wait!
Fantastic....one of the best till now....please continue....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Really great story, I love how in both this and your other that you really make the emotions come through in actions and reactions, rather than just stating it outright or ignoring it all together. Really makes on care about the characters. I like After School better, but this is a definite *****
Since you decided up front to develop the story smoothly to climax (rather than rushing to the action), I'd have liked to see more characterization. Examples: 1 - would have liked more insight into the coffee shop chat. 2 - clearly the sisters aren't close older sister didn't know about her sister's family situation & younger sister didn't know about the flower shop endeavor. however, I expected you to address the reasons for this dynamic as the background for this insest-BDSM story
LOVED this story! Outstanding scenario and great detail. More please!
Good story, well written. It's sad that this author hasn't completed it.
This story has SO many great possibilities in terms of future relationships. You owe it to the erotic literature world to write more chapters. You are a talent!