All Comments on 'What are Sisters for? Ch. 01'

by Dreamthiev

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bi48186bdbi48186bdover 15 years ago
Wish I was Jenny

Loved the story. Wish I was Jenny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW

That was one of the best stories I have read here I loved it can't wait for more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dont make us wait!

Please do not make us wait long for the next chapter! I cant wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hurry with the next chapter

Great start, please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Job

Fantastic....one of the best till now....please continue....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

ElectricBadgerElectricBadgerabout 13 years ago
Thanks for writing

Really great story, I love how in both this and your other that you really make the emotions come through in actions and reactions, rather than just stating it outright or ignoring it all together. Really makes on care about the characters. I like After School better, but this is a definite *****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
story development

Since you decided up front to develop the story smoothly to climax (rather than rushing to the action), I'd have liked to see more characterization. Examples: 1 - would have liked more insight into the coffee shop chat. 2 - clearly the sisters aren't close older sister didn't know about her sister's family situation & younger sister didn't know about the flower shop endeavor. however, I expected you to address the reasons for this dynamic as the background for this insest-BDSM story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great

great story when can we have the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very creative

LOVED this story! Outstanding scenario and great detail. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good story

Good story, well written. It's sad that this author hasn't completed it.

lowkeyonelowkeyoneabout 8 years ago
WOW

Well written and different yet very good. Thank you.

greygirlgreygirlabout 5 years ago
More please!

This story has SO many great possibilities in terms of future relationships. You owe it to the erotic literature world to write more chapters. You are a talent!

LateCDLateCDabout 3 years ago

You teaser. Great story and no follow up.

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