All Comments on 'What Feats He Did That Day Pt. 03'

by MarshAlien

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DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 16 years ago
Holy Hell!

Marsh, this is fantastic. You had me going from the very first word. I loved it. This is what real fiction is all about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WOW!

This started off as a fair yarn, but it keeps gaining steam. You remain a top notch writer. Hang in there!

eightballbumeightballbumalmost 16 years ago
Nicely Done

I've enjoyed each installment. Keep em coming.

8BB

tickledkittytickledkittyalmost 16 years ago
Bravo!

Just incredible. I can't stress enough that this is your best ever.

MichaelphyteMichaelphytealmost 16 years ago
Exelant story telling, hated the sack of Troy

Greate series; can't skip any of your stories, even the sack of Troy. So well done, almost feel there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ripple?

I now know you are no youngster. I have such fond and great memories of Ripple from the 70's! Wine coolaid, I loved it but Gallo doesn't mak it any more.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

JustFourFunJustFourFunover 11 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for an enjoyable story!

risingthunderboltrisingthunderboltover 10 years ago
Man this really is a fantasy category story

It would be cool if that guy gets legs in real life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ripple??

And who can forget that great Fred Sanford line about liking to mix his ripple with Champaigne, and call it Champipple?

Once again, I am enjoying the series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Countless readers

Must be saving comments till the last chapter

JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNo2 months ago

No lol for this one. The cost of l9sing is t99 great. 5.

JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNo2 months ago

No lol for this one. The cost of losing is too great. 5.

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