by MarshAlien
Marsh, this is fantastic. You had me going from the very first word. I loved it. This is what real fiction is all about.
This started off as a fair yarn, but it keeps gaining steam. You remain a top notch writer. Hang in there!
Just incredible. I can't stress enough that this is your best ever.
Greate series; can't skip any of your stories, even the sack of Troy. So well done, almost feel there.
I now know you are no youngster. I have such fond and great memories of Ripple from the 70's! Wine coolaid, I loved it but Gallo doesn't mak it any more.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.
It would be cool if that guy gets legs in real life
And who can forget that great Fred Sanford line about liking to mix his ripple with Champaigne, and call it Champipple?
Once again, I am enjoying the series.