All Comments on 'What Feats He Did That Day Pt. 04'

This is going to rival A Stitch in Time as your best story. Keep up the good work!

My thought would have been to take her to Joe Fazio's or to Humphries. And I would have thought that Aqualung would be the ideal source. But I guess I've been gone from the Kanawha Valley too long....

Excellent story so far. When's the next installment due? :D

I so enjoy your writing. Keep it coming! 8BB

i like this story. awesome like all the others but i just wish u hadn't named the female love interest after a male pro wrestler. i'm getting some disturbing mental images!

Really enjoyed the reading!

I just had to look up King of the Bullwhip on IMDB after reading this. I wonder if I could find a copy.

That being said, excellent work. I haven't read such a unique premise or main character in quite some time, and the writing itself is above par. Looking forward to more!

This isn't a story. It's a window to another world. Thanks, Marsh!

*snerk* Excellent.

I really appreciate your great story content and plot, all spiced up with a little erotic content!!

Hoping our main man will get some action in the future though.

"the cardinal rule of politics: The buck never really stops at all."

The cardinal rule of bureaucracy: “The buck never stops at my desk!”

Lots of novelists started out as inky wretches. Like, Hemingway, fer instance.

Your stories really flow well, and the dialogue is great. (I noticed that there are actually three different stories in one. Cute.) The humor is funny and not forced. I haven't finished "Feats" yet, but I just cain't hardly wait to do so. Thanks.

Rarely do you find an unlikely hero whose character is believable and the dialogue just flows in a wonderfully hilarious manner. I 😍 !

Engaging, witty,,, just damned good!.

Please don't take this as a criticism. In symbolic logic Act2B^~2B translates to "Act to be "and" not to be". Shouldn't the ampersand actually be "v"? Just wondering...

This is really very... Very good...

-jaye-

Story keeps getting better!

Lol, great, superlatives abound, and damn, this is good! 5.