All Comments on 'What Happened to Honour?'

But watch the Grammer. It can be distracting when it's so incorrect.

We need to hear more of the adventures of John Canning. Also of his fall, all supermen have their Kyptonite.

The main character had no redeeming traits so no way to identify with him. The sex scenes were therefore sterile with no possible excitement possible. One star.

Dude, what's the point? Where's the twist? If it's just a power trip, then well done. If not, then...

Possably a little too much ego involved

QWs male 'leads' are without redeeming features, except a Magic Prong! His female 'leads' are Stepford Wives who switch allegiance at the first touch of Magic!

when all those bloom together,,,,,thunder arises, TK U MLJ LV NV

many of ur stories feel like ur makin me soar on pure bliss, or have my testicles dissected by wolves,

i dont know whether to cry or die?

i dont wanna discourage u, but there seems to be a repeatin pattern in sex acts description. its totally ur wish to do as u please, but it also is very hurtful to read such stories,

then y do i read? i do not know, but i know that the stories may be fictional, alas the emotions are not!

Nothing went wrong in QW's life Jimbo123!

In fact every thing went right making him a great wordsmith, able to create fabulous worlds for thousands of his readers.

What did you do with YOUR life Jimbo???

Boring and predictable