All Comments on 'What Happens at the Nudist Resort..'

by JMaxwell69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
company benefits

I wished I worked for that company.

Romantic1Romantic1almost 15 years ago
Abrupt Ending

Ending too abrupt AND lots more pairings that could be made. Hope you continue this (forget about the last paragraph - or better yet just edit it away) and keep going.

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Good

A good story with some very hot sex but the story did end quickly and was a little too long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good but wanting more

Very hot story although, what happened the other 3 days, this story has some much potentual, and it needs to go there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Brilliant - When will part two cum along ?

Brilliant - When will part two cum along ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wayyyy to long

too long.

IMcRoutIMcRoutabout 14 years ago
Inspiring!

Well, the ending is a bit botched and it literally cries for a follow-up.

respect_4_womenrespect_4_womenover 13 years ago
Good Story:

1. Good character description, for all of them. Real people! The usual reader already knows, has already met all the types described in the story. There aren't only super-humanly-beautiful-strong-and-hung here!

2. Good build up, description of the situation, relationship dynamics and overall effort to make everything believable as a real life situation. Stories in which every character is naked and already has sex in the first paragraph are so boring.

3. uh-mmmm dude! MORE!!! wtf!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!

Keep up the good work, man

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

I hope the crew makes a second trip back to the resort!

mammoetmammoetabout 10 years ago
great

nice story but it could use another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
wow

great story, abrupt ending. Need more!

Rapier875Rapier875almost 7 years ago
That was good, right up until the last paragraph.

Talk about a big build up and then nothing.

How can you not finish this, but just leave us wondering what happened over the next 3 days ?

Up until the end it was worth 4 stars, but I'm only giving it 2 because I'm so disappointed.

Rapier875Rapier875over 1 year ago

You got bored with this and just wrapped it up as quick as you could, didn't you ?

That's not what a good writer does.

Very, VERY disappointing ending !

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