All Comments on 'What I Became'

Now that was a story !

no useless poetic blabla, hot and sex driven

Wow! Classic short story format. Well written. Great short story ending. Literotica should have more writing like this. By that I don’t mean more horror necessarily. Just good writing

Now that is erotic tentacle horror. Great story.

Grabbed hold from first few lines and did not let go. You created/painted wildly erotic scenes. I’d be frightened too if this beast was not fed. Love your work.