All Comments on 'What I Came Home To'

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...and bust up a friendship!

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But I like it anyway.

If it were me I'd be hoping Marlene would never get Doug to eat her pussy!! I would happy to have her bringing me fresh creampie. What an setup Dougs fucks her and you clean up!!

Gimmie a hint as to why knowingly sucking up another mans slimy curdled warm cum is erotic - is arousing to you bobie?<P>

We know you are addicted to male humiliation, sucking down cock cum, watching other cocks from your closet. The wonderment is why?<P>

Why are you so absurdly subhumanly sick?

One of your better ones JPB!

He should be so lucky. It would be hard to blackmail the willing. Thanks for the good read

, or whoever,Where is the originality? Not every man's brain goes offline when he gets a mouth around his cock, nor does every woman go brain dead when she gets aroused. Virtually every writier in this genre starts with that assumption. If Bob, or whoever, jerks his cock out of Marlene's mouth and tells her to take off, because she doesn't have near the leverage that she tries to express, then you have a story that is much more open ended. Quit following the beaten path of the masses and your own stories and give us something new and more exciting.

Give us a story we can beat off to. Who cares about being all artsy, creative, original, etc. What is the stroke factor of the story? Does it get the reader hard or wet? That is what matters with sex stories. If you want artsy, go to the library. We came to cum! Thanks for the cum worthy story Just Plain Bob.

One of JPB's good ones.

At last some humour. Say what you like about creampie eating etc, but this was fun and if you don't like the topic well, you do have choices.... Thanks JPB - you deliver.

But he needs to set the video camera up and get the bitch blackmailing him on tape and them figure out a way to screw her big time! Just another reminder to watch where you put your dick. Bet he turns on the light every time from now on.

...........as always. A truly Master Wordsmith !!!

Next time she comes over get your I-phone in record mode and go through the whole thing and then fry her ass. Besides he may not be around long anyway. His wife is pissed at him and it may be time for a divorce and a move far, far away. She's going to be pissed when he tells her what happened with Marlene and is probably going to toss him out. That will also be proof that no rape occurred. Why didn't Marlene call the cops right away? Both unlikely and implausible. Another unfinished story.

Meh

his wifes body. TK U MLJ LV NV

I can't understand why people think you're a good writer.

Above says it all.

I can't believe how good this story is, realistic and dick hardening. I just don't understand the commenters who are so mean. They would not know an erotic story. This one was hot and great sexy too. Lots of haters who are simplistic a-holes.

been close but no banana good one 4

Simply inane.

You are better than this crap.

Another story like this and you lose your man card.

A THREE YEAR OLD COULD WRITE A BETTER STORY THAN THIS PATHETIC SHITE...

This one was bad. Very bad. This one should have been erased from the computer before it was ever uploaded. In fact this one should have been erased from the author's brain before it even got to the computer. It was that bad. 1 Star.

I think it was astory that could happen. The reasoning was ok for her to be there. I feel the rape threat was over the top.

Fuck all these sissy faggots with their negative comments I think the story was fucking awesome I'd like to do the same exact thing fuck the shit out of my best friend's wife and have her beg me to do her again I almost had a situation like this happen to me when I was married only one year and I'm not going to go into the details but I didn't take advantage of the situation and I should have oh I regret that now fuck the rest of the pussy's I think this is a bad story and they're the three year old mentality the story is brilliant

You have to be one twisted (QUEER) sissy to eat a cum filled snatch!!

Could have been the mother-in-law - or worse yet, the grandmother!! lol

This asshole doesn't even know his own wife? He is lapping at another woman's cunt and doesn't know that it is not his wife's? C'mon...let's get a little bit of realism here! Just too stupid! I gave it a 2.

I almost had sex with my sister in-law. She was where I expected my wife to be and it was totally dark. Pussy tasted different and her moans and reactions were totally different, so it stopped quickly. If I was a few beers deep I probably wouldn't have noticed or cared and she told me point blank she wouldn't have stopped me. Oh well opportunities lost.

Still looking for transmitter from Bob. Just more mud.

Dial 911 and let her call the cops. No bruising, no marks and the neighbors didn't hear anything. And he might mention that if she lies, that when he gets out on bail, he's going to break her into little pieces since her has nothing to lose. Bad ending.

. . . knows what sloppy seconds feels like. It’s unmistakable, even when it’s your own.

Why not just go blow Doug and cut out the middlewoman?

Wildone101, that is a very brilliant and funny comment.

Nope.

As disgusting as ever! Happens when one does not know who ones spent donor is!! Watching mom get fucked by various lovers as Bob grew up can leave an impression on the mind! Allows one to eat a cum filled pissy and feel ok with it!!

stupid shit. bob rarely disappoints, but well done Wildone101!

Bullshit

Disgusting. Go on to suck on the source

Hhmmpf. LP

Hahaha now we know what Just Plain Bob likes the taste of

Sorry dude, I love moat of your stories. But this one was lame. Just sayin. At least it was short. Semper Fi

If you have to submit shit like this to go over 800 stories, it sure ain't worth it.

Marlene should have also mentioned that she and her husband Doug have been trying to make a baby for two years. Marlene should have told him that she wouldn't tell Shelly what happened if he helped her get pregnant.

Great idea, but a bit strange that he didn't Immediately recognise it wasn't his wife's voice. I guess some people really aren't very observant, and that's why they need to be cucked.

It was a good story until the sex with his friend's wife. Then it went so far downhill I could only rate this a 1. When it happened, why didn't he call his friend & explain the accident? Bob