All Comments on 'What Lies Beneath: New Lingerie'

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impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
after this...

After this why didn't they return to be just the two? They didn't do it, so divorce showed...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

How long after the child was born did the divorce come and what was the reason? It's not that she a slut because he's obviously ok with that. An explanation would help the readers

luvthexluvthexover 9 years agoAuthor
The story will continue

We are pleased with the following our story has gathered. We will explain more and answer your questions as the story moves to its conclusion. We hope you will find it satisfactory and then we will move on to other stories.

EnvisageEnvisageover 9 years ago
Twist

What a very interesting twist beyond what I would have imagined. I do have to wonder what happened between these two lovers who seemed to be fulfilled sexually; her through total physical sexual freedom unhindered by taboos and him by watching her being taken to places sexually beyond his imagination and ability. Yet, the marriage did not last. What twist happened in their marriage to cause this couple to separate? I am glad to hear that the story has not ended, because my mind is left wanting more.

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