All Comments on 'What She Wanted'

Very easy to see how this all transpired. It moved smoothly from point to point to ending. Thanks for a good read.

tail end pete

Please keep these kind of stories coming, We love them!

I love your writing and the way your mind works - sexy, erotic, direct, no bullshit! I was so aroused!

It is wonderful when a family plays together...

in my opinion the Author is better suited to writing bdsm tales , the clinical , hard edged style of writing favored by scorpio seems to fit this genre better than the loving wives / romance / mature , that he also writes .

one thing of note is in many of the Authors storys in other genres , the end result is one where, someone who starts off in a weak position , eventually ends with that person achieving primacy / control / becoming the Alpha ... so i am surprised that scorpio has not written more in the BDSM category.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver

What a crock of shit. Sisters love one another (sometimes). But I know of no sisters that want to share their husbands on a continuing basis. This is sick puppy shit. Post it in BDSM where it belongs.

Constructive criticism is welcome by most writers. Your drivel is not. You're an asshat. And yes, sisters can live like this. I married into this. My ex-wifes mom was the Sam in this story. The three of them lived together for 48 years before he passed. Like my mom used to say, if you don't have anything nice to say, keep your mouth shut. Fucktard.

I wish I had two submissive sisters to bang at my every whim!!!

May these story become movie??