All Comments on 'What the Fuck'

I think it would have worked better in third person. I do like to see teasing daughters get taught a lesson by their fathers, so I hope he continues coaching her...

Just took a look at the long list of stories you have on this site.

I started reading a couple of your Baby Sitter stories and now I can't stop till I have read them all.

Love you telling the story from the sitter's perspective and that they are short and allows me to get to the next one without getting bored as I sometimes will when reading long stories that just drag.

Once I finish this series, I will start on the next. I am hooked.

Sure like to touch base with you. carygrant_69@Hotmail.com.

Ed

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I enjoyed this story, even though it was a bit short. I hope we'll be seeing further chapters about this girl and her dad.