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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Total Load of Fucking Crap

Stick this shit back up your fucking ass hole

smotpsmotpalmost 6 years agoAuthor
We can’t please everyone...

...all of the time.

There is plenty more out there on Literotica that will appeal. Thanks for taking the trouble to comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Right mix of things.

I really liked the article.

You have written it with the right mix of romance of sex. Please keep writing such stories - short, romantic and hot !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Filthy!

I sort of figured it out but the surprise ending still got a reaction. Erotic! Horny! Dirty!

Great job!

R.

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfover 4 years ago
Loved it

Have you thought about making an audio recording of it? I would love to hear it if you decide to make one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Plot Twist

She was actually fucked by a fire hose. This shits amazing.

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