All Comments on 'What Would I Do Without Leslie'

Decent plot line for a JPB story, but lousy ending. Almost like his brain quit.

... I'd score it higher if I thought you were going to fill in the blanks. Maybe telling it from her side and letting us see if she ever learns how badly she misjudged him and realizes he's not just having a "snit-fit".

And what have you done with JPB?

Some writers like to leave a little to the imagination of the reader. Because If one tries to think, the story can play out in a number of directions or at least variations of intensity. JPB has pointed you in the general direction, go the rest of the way across the street with out holding hands.

Rob-- whom I guess is the author?-- finds out from a former data that Leslie has been telling ANY girl that he dates... that he has a STD. <b>So HOW does this fucking idiot react? He decides that Leslie mst really love him.</b>

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Yeech.....

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Once again we see a small weak vile man that generates

disgust from anyone reading this story. Beating up a few guys that have been fucking his wife is a feeble attemt to convince a reader that the husband

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watch now and see some dumb fuck will ask WHY do we read JB stories if we hate them? Then real question is why does JB write such crap?

that this story sucks, it would be Harry. He appears to be the foremost authority on sucking, here at the LIT. Who, what, when, where, why and especially HOW! Perhaps he will put that in his NEXT story?

Don't be discouraged JPB, because with Harrys comment now posted, your story has just been deemed HIV Negative! YES,clean as a freakin whistle,WHOHOO, makes you feel good all over , yes no maybe?

O WELL, keep those stories coming, Cheers

Wow! A real Wimp! Authenticated but not willing to live with the title.

So he fights back and gives us a reasonable story to read.

Thank you JPB for all your hard work!

the dumb fuck for commenting on a story you didn't like 2 years ago. Why shouldn't JPB keep writing, dumb fucks like you will keep reading him and make dumb comments.<p>The only thing that sucked so far is your normal negative comment. As mentioned, why don't you favor us with one of your perfect stories? Or could it be your writing would suck moose cock, like your comments.

thanks, good story

He should have taken the tire iron to his cheating slut wife. She deserved it as much as his so called friends. Good story, thanks....Rich

then why not arrange an accident and run the bitch off a cliff and then collect the insurance and sell the house and have your revenge also.....if the police ask just tell them you still have a happy marriage and it was unfortunate that your wife died....you still loved her and would miss her ....it was her tha twouldnt move to kansas city to be with you not the other way around...you had tried to get her to move but she wouldnt leave her friends ....you were just waiting for her to get over that andf come be with you...then cry a little ....all your friends would vouch for you except chris and brad maybe ....none of the others would know as im sure your wife wouldnt tell them why you left ...sillly bitch ..other wise she would have filed for divorce

is needed to end this Story. the Divorce the Wrangling for position.everything a Bitch would Do .He should also Hire a Private Detective to get Evidence to use against Her and any of Her Lovers Esp. the Married Ones or Co-Workers of His

Very Good Story

The tire iron beating of several guys who cuckolded our hero makes for nice feelings of revenge for the readers but the reality is our Rob would be in jail for quite a long time for attempted murder X 2; threats from organized crime, a street gang with a lot of clout in the area, well, maybe such threats would fly, but Rob's threats wouldn't. The guys he beat up would have been in an emergency room with serious injuries; a cop would have started the questioning, and I'd bet Rob would get arrested, charged, and convicted -- a slam dunk for the prosecutor. Doesn't anyone here watch Law and Order? That's how it always happens on that show . . . Seriously, though, I see a number of plot holes despite a fairly well-written story. Firstly, if an ordinary teenage boy found out his dates quit going out with him because they were told he had gonorrhea by Leslie, his so-called friend (whom he was not even dating at the time), he would feel betrayed, stabbed in the back, not pleased because it meant Leslie loved him. I for one would not trust such a girl for a second, let alone start dating her. Secondly, the idea that Rob could not draw money to hire a private detective because Leslie would catch on is also hard to swallow. The simple way to do it is to draw a check a day after the monthly statement comes. This permits nearly a month before she would get another statement that could alert her, more than enough time to find out what's going on (I'm assuming she does not check their account balance all the time, but if she does, then Rob could take out a small loan, or a credit card cash advance, or ask his parents for some money, or even pawn a few belongings -- I'm certain there would be a way). But an I.T. manager would be smart enough not to do it himself. Just like the doctor who treats himself (he has a fool for a patient), trying to play sleuth when one has no training is just plain stupid, and Rob isn't stupid. Thirdly, waiting for Leslie to file a divorce after Rob took all their money is pretty ridiculous. Any man, wronged as Rob was, just could not keep the anger at bay and divorce would have been filed more quickly than you can say, "Jack Robinson." Fourthly, there is the nonsense that a threat to Chris would keep him quite about Rob's violent assault and avoid criminal charges for Rob, as I mentioned at the beginning. Of course, Leslie's behavior is pretty weird, but I guess one sees all types, even crazy ones, who act as if the other party (Rob) has lost it while nothing is wrong with them. I do agree with another reader that a sequel would be nice for this story. Thanks for writing.

The tire iron beating of several guys who cuckolded our hero makes for nice feelings of revenge for the readers but the reality is our Rob would be in jail for quite a long time for attempted murder X 2; threats from organized crime, a street gang with a lot of clout in the area, well, maybe such threats would fly, but Rob's threats wouldn't. The guys he beat up would have been in an emergency room with serious injuries; a cop would have started the questioning, and I'd bet Rob would get arrested, charged, and convicted -- a slam dunk for the prosecutor. Doesn't anyone here watch Law and Order? That's how it always happens on that show . . . Seriously, though, I see a number of plot holes despite a fairly well-written story. Firstly, if an ordinary teenage boy found out his dates quit going out with him because they were told he had gonorrhea by Leslie, his so-called friend (whom he was not even dating at the time), he would feel betrayed, stabbed in the back, not pleased because it meant Leslie loved him. I for one would not trust such a girl for a second, let alone start dating her. Secondly, the idea that Rob could not draw money to hire a private detective because Leslie would catch on is also hard to swallow. The simple way to do it is to draw a check a day after the monthly statement comes. This permits nearly a month before she would get another statement that could alert her, more than enough time to find out what's going on (I'm assuming she does not check their account balance all the time, but if she does, then Rob could take out a small loan, or a credit card cash advance, or ask his parents for some money, or even pawn a few belongings -- I'm certain there would be a way). But an I.T. manager would be smart enough not to do it himself. Just like the doctor who treats himself (he has a fool for a patient), trying to play sleuth when one has no training is just plain stupid, and Rob isn't stupid. Thirdly, waiting for Leslie to file a divorce after Rob took all their money is pretty ridiculous. Any man, wronged as Rob was, just could not keep the anger at bay and divorce would have been filed more quickly than you can say, "Jack Robinson." Fourthly, there is the nonsense that a threat to Chris would keep him quite about Rob's violent assault and avoid criminal charges for Rob, as I mentioned at the beginning. Of course, Leslie's behavior is pretty weird, but I guess one sees all types, even crazy ones, who act as if the other party (Rob) has lost it while nothing is wrong with them. I do agree with another reader that a sequel would be nice for this story. Thanks for writing.

wife fucks you over... you do nothing to her, but you tire iron the guys taking a free peice of ass from a slut. It's funny, but most marriage counselers will tell you that this is a very female reaction... woman always want to claw the eye out of the other women fucking their husbands... men typically want to deal with the person breaking thier vow with them... maybe the author has some sexual identity issues here.

read the first paragraph, skip to the last, and you will not miss any thing and will understand pretty much what the story is about.

I like this story - once hubby figured out what was going on, he took action - lots of action. ViO may be correct about the legal stuff, however, this is just a story.

So the dude fucked his wife...punch him in the face, kick him in the jewels, sure. He deserves that...but murder? Hope he likes the taste of priison food and taking Bubba's cock up his ass.

....especially ones based on idiotic premises.16 years of cluelessness then decisive action?16 years of her attitude with no eruptions.Fuck-you.This time HIV closer to truth than most of these anonymous pussy commentators ,who just exist to see violent consequences.Anonymous comments lambasting Harry aren't funny.They just look weak. Give Harry shit if you want but have the spine to post some moniker so he can respond.Pistolpackinpete

'''would like a follow up if so inclined.

Thanks for the entertainment.

This is a story begging for a Proper ending..

and with 2 of her lovers being Whipped it would be an interesting way to see how things go for the rest do they run and escape or stand and get a Beat Down.

Thanks for sharing.

She's the one that needs a tire iron up her twat. His friends were simply taking advantage of what was on offer.

whatever it changed my life and style, TK U MLJ LV NV

No equivocating, he makes his move away.

But the fact that he left town proves that he was embarrassed to stay. He has nothing to be ashamed of. The cheating whore skank cunt twat low-life asshole wife was the one cheating with everyone and everyone knew but him. He should have stayed and sued her for divorce and all of his so-called friends for alienation. He would have been vindicated and all the men divorced from their wives and the skank would have to move because no one would touch her with a ten foot pole.

How about that. I just wrote the alternative ending to this tale. I think I'm ready to publish.

OH YEAH

The flow felt more like a pachinko machine.

Has potential....

JPB does a good story and a better one if the guy gets balls. cant wait for his new one to finish.

No matter how much he has loved her or how good she is in the sack. He did the right thing. It is wives doing things like this and having that "like it or lump it" attitude that causes so many murders. There are hundreds of men in the pen that could not stand it and killed their cheating wives when something like this came up. I would have if it ever came up but I would have divorced her now and killed her later in a real sneaky way. And I would expect her to do the same thing if she caught me and I would never taunt her or tell her that it didn't hurt her all the times I had been doing it. Damn cheating sluts and them saying "It was just sex, you know I love you"!

I find it hard to believe that she was able to fuck all his friends without anyone telling him about it. In my experience, everyone either has a real friend who will tell him, or they know a spiteful person who can't wait to break the bad news. So, this is a highly improbable situation. More like a bad dream.

But I'm with Sugna on this one. I liked the story. Typical JPB story, well written, interesting tale of a cheating slut and her clueless husband. But what I found impossible to believe is that it went on for SO many years. He couldn't be smart enough to do his rather difficult job and at the same time be dumb enough not to see what his wife was doing. And I have to believe that at least ONE of his so-called friends would have told him what was going on. This story made all the guys look like nothing but simple minded pussy hounds. At least one of them had to be a good guy. It's simple odds. All this story needed to be a really, really good story was to shorten the period to 3 or 4 years. Even that is a tad long but more believable. Write on Bob.

what kind of total dumbass could be that clueless. none of his friends were married? im sure the women in his friends lives would have noticed and said something. totally unbelievable.

...you&Acirc;&acute;ve done great stories and you have written a lot of junk - but this one is way below your capabilities. Nothing really fits, nothing is logical and the characters are stupid in a way that makes it hard to believe they could exist in reality.

The answer to the title question is simple, live a better life! Given the guys actions against the two he fucked up, I would suggest he get to know a lot of shady people...people who would love cash in exchange for a hit and run fatal accident, or a robbery gone bad...all while he was in plain view of a lot of witnesses of course.

Then perhaps once a year one of his former friends could experience a life altering, or fatal accident. OK, I'm perhaps a tad vindictive, but what the hell, better that than having to live with a cheating wife who is still breathing, specially when her demise puts money in his pocket. Besides, think of how anxious all his former friends will get when they start putting two plus two together and figuring out what the hurt or dead ones had in common!!! What fun, just to think of them constantly jumping at shadows and living in constant fear.

think about the other ten dudes. TK U MLJ LV NV

The only way he should stay with her is for her to help him ambush all her lovers, for her to remain faithful, while setting him up with other women, so that HE can have some variety!

Hiring a hit-man is way cheaper than a divorce.

He is living in a different city, which would help make him less of a person of interest as the cops call it.

Instead of half he would get it all plus the insurance on her.

it was a reasonable reaction on the hubbies part. to say that I understand the wife's part, would be a lie. she had to know that fucking his coworkers would eventually lead to him finding out. according to the story, she says she loves him still. giving her mentality, perhaps she does.

no way could he not find out in 16 years. someone would tip him off. he may be a retard and not notice, but his "friends" all had girlfriends and they we can assume arent all stupid. if she was fucking everybody in town then everyone wouldve known.

But this guy was so dumb for so many years, I'm surprised he can add 2 + 2 and get 4. Not one of your smarter characters Bob. And you didn't finish the story. Once again.

Everything was well done but physically assaulting the boyfriends. It's just not believable that he could get away with that. Most guys will fuck any woman that makes herself available, particularly an attractive one. Killing her is more believable, and I certainly wouldn't condone that. They wouldn't have fucked her if she didn't want them to. Weak characters, but it's all her fault. I think that you did that to just appease the violence prone anonys out there, and a true artist doesn't appease any audience just to make his/her art acceptable.

She made a big thing out of how she only did it on his or her business trips, she conveniently forgot to mention her FAKE business trips!

Until you're ready to marry again, you can certainly play while you're separated!

He's gone. As far as she's concerned, good riddance. Enough.

What are the chances something mysterious happens to scare off his new girlfriend?

Another unfinished story!!

Got will it ever end?

He has time to work through it a couple each year or so. They were his friends not random dudes she picked up. None of them warned him. Their betrayal was as bad as hers and laughed behind his back. Great pain is required.

WHAT DID HE DO TO ALL THE OTHER GUYS FUCKING HER.....ENDED FAR TOO SOON...YOU NEEDED TO EXPAND THE STORY....AS IT IS...IT IS PATHETIC....

Anyone who believes it's okay for men to screw another man's wife - and that those men can't be held responsible - has been drinking the feminist's or the effeminate's kool-aid. If those men had sex with another man's wife NOT knowing she was married, that's one thing. But all the men in this story knew she was married, knew the husband, and repeatedly committed adultery with his wife. All the disdain, scorn, and disrespect shown towards the husband was simply a by-product of the cheating wife's behavior and her treatment of him.

When writing about whipping a man's ass for screwing your wife, the only thing "over the top" about that story will be the manner in which a decisive blow was delivered.

you are quite right about this his wife is cheating on her with every men in town and that silly bastard is hitting innocent person over a crime committed by his wife why not to wear ski mask and give that bitch broken bones and after making her handicap, divorce her to make her life miserable. let's see which one of her lover will take care of her after this.

Being betrayed by the wife is one thing, being betrayed by his friends is another. They laughed at him behind his back and deserve to have their tongues cut out. The crime wasn't just hers but theirs as well. Makes a nice hobby. Every few months go back and left off a little steam with that tire iron.

Are you really that simple minded?? You think his friends who, for years repeatedly fucked his wife are INNOCENT??? The lowlife motherfuckers are supposed to be his FRIENDS. I don't know where you live but, where I come from, friends DO NOT DO THAT to another friend and not expect to get a well deserved vicious beating when he's been caught. Your ignorant attitude makes me think that you live near South Bend, Indiana. (which I suspect was originally a retard colony.)

Logic dictates that if you'll fuck ONE friend's wife, any other friends you have will wonder if maybe you've been fucking THEIRS... because you've already proven your lack of honor, so they know that you would.

I gave the story three stars because it wasn't realistic enough.... as if the author skimmed over the IDEA of the story instead of presenting it with realism and PUNCH.

.... no explanation as to how she knew he was following her. Did she SEE him or does she have a tracker on his phone to protect herself??? WHERE'S THE CONSEQUENCES??????? She's got the house to herself and is still getting all the cock she wants. Too many loose ends.

I was finishing reading a JimBob44's tale when, for some reason, this story popped up back in my mind. Recalling my reaction after my first read, I pretty did exactly what I did the last time around (laugh my fucking ass off), so I decided to revisit and give a review for it, since it gave me so much joy.

And good news: "What Would I Do Without Leslie" is still as funny as the first time around. 'Cause it's still one of the most fucked up stories JPB ever came up with.

Where do with start here?... OK, let's talk about Leslie. For some really, weird reasons, Leslie is the first genuine Bob slut author introduced me to. Somehow, I wasn't aware yet of all the faithless bitches in "Windows", "Cynthia's Business Trips" and countless other that pollutes all of Bob's tales, skanks who valued their sexual gratification over all else, especially the men they always emphatically declared to 'love to death' (a well known Bob-ism!) But yeah - Leslie was my first... and, holy shit, did she delivered! I just cannot wrap my head around the idea of a woman who's this obsess with some dude, for this long... yet did, to her own admission, EVERYTHING HUMANLY POSSIBLE to make sure he'll never spend the rest of his life with her! It was just by complete luck (and her husband's ridiculously high aloofness - more on that later...) that she managed to keep him around for three decades. And yeah, sure, some hard work went into her sad-ass masterplan (I will always be troubled by how untroubled Rob was about Nancy's revelation... any sane man who hear such a thing would seriously start to question his whole relationship with such a psycho!), but it is a testament on HOW MUCH PEOPLE DISLIKE ROB that even female acquaintances of him, who probably know how much of a whore his wife is, never bothered to clue him in on that fact. In a lot of way, she truly picked the right guy to throw her devotion into - the perfect patsy, too asleep at the wheel to realize that his car had crashed a long time ago. But it was complete hubris to think that he couldn't live without her - let's never forget: she pursued Rob, not the other way around. Plus, if she really thinks she could cuckold him with complete immunity, she would have told him all along about her infidelities, wouldn't she?... You dumb slut.

As for Rob... man, what a sad fuck. It's one thing to let someone else take control of your life - can't imagine living that way, but hey, to each his own. But it's quite another to let someone control your life so much, you're not even the slightest bit aware that this life of yours was a complete lie since you started a relationship with that person! Rob is way too aloof about how Leslie managed him throughout their years together. If he had been more alert, there's no doubt he would have pick up some sign that something is rotten in the state of Denmark... In a lot of way, him finally taking action to get rid of Leslie and all the backstabbers in his life is way little, was too late - the bitch pretty much made sure he spent most of his adulthood as a cuckold... 'can't get that back. And sure, he could break the kneecaps of everything assholes that ever fucked her... But to what point? The one person he should really beat the fuck out of, he can't touch at all. Plus, he could still end up in jail for it - no doubt someone with eventually figure out the connection between all of those victims... although, I'm pretty sure that, by the 3rd attack, his ex-buddies would know it was him, which means that Leslie would end up having way less toys to play with... silver lining, I guess!

The worst (and most hilarious) part of it, though: Rob learns NOTHING from the whole deal. Hey, Kudos for him for cleaning up their bank account (fuck that whole 'take half' nonsense you see too many authors write. The bitch destroys the marriage? Well then, she better get the judge to force him to get her money back!), but not trying to get at least an order of separation from the marriage plays perfectly into Leslie's hands - the crazy slut doesn't want out! She's calling you everything to get back in her bed - does that sounds like someone who's going to ask for a divorce!? Hell, let's go to the most realistic conclusion this story could ever have: either Leslie going to a psych ward over losing her husband... or Leslie killing Bob. 'Cause you know she's coo coo for cocoa puffs, right? The shit that she pulled off, back when they were kids, that was reprehensible to the max. And it has been my experience that crazy bitches like her, as they get older, usually escalate their reprehensible behaviors, the older they get, so... what we have here, folks, is a bonafide Glenn Close/"Fatal Attraction" doppelganger. There's no actual way to tell how exactly she will react when Rob find another woman to marry - like, seriously, she could very well show up to his door and, next you know, the KCPD have to deal with a double murder/suicide... Yet this is the woman you're not divorcing yet, Rob? This is the woman you still take the time to take phone calls from? Hey Rob - still have no idea how she got your phone number? Not bother at all by this, doofus? Alright man... it's your death.

lol Man I love this story. Sure, everybody in it are all extra-stupid, but boy is it an enjoyable read because of it! Heck of a writer, that JPB fellow is - even his most repugnant tales can be fun for all... OK, not all of them (seriously, if I could bitchslapped the narrator in "Cynthia's Business Trips", I would definitely do it...), but this one sure hit the mark, in my book.

Dumb story.

Just plain never finish a story Bob

No effort. No plot. Wimp husband has slut for wife.

Stays married.

Next story please. Just change the spouses names and write the same lame plot.

The problem guy's is that the author is a cuck himself.

not good. Writer that is

Where is FTDS when you really need him? Leslie is pitiful, not funny!

Like the tire irons on the lovers, but he should have cut her loose.

Why leave so much on the table ? It was a good read all his friends yet st home she was a great wife . Did she ever come to realize that she was humiliating him or how he found out ? How come none of the women hadn't told him if she was with all his friends ? The men in the restroom confirmed she really wasn't getting into humiliating her husband by talking with him on the phone while having sex with them , then why did she seek them out if it wasn't a turn on ?

Another good story ruined by a weak ending. How could any human being really think it was okay to do what she did. Did she hear 2 of her lovers had been beaten up? What did she think. He should have arranged more revenge against her. She should have been publicly outed as a slut and lost her job.

Another pathetic less-than-mediocre offering from a never-was. JPB must have never kept a woman satisfied in his entire life.

This would be so nice with a part 2

What is the problem with anonymous 11/01/19? It seems that most of your stories have a very nasty comment from anonymous. Could it be the same person? There is nothing specific, just trash talk.

In my opinion, the story was not one of the best, but pretty good. I always comment as anonymous whether favorable or unfavorable and try to give a specific reason if unfavorable. I would rate this as 4*, but am giving it 5* to offset the poisonous remarks given on 11/01/19. I liked the story. Not one of your best, but still good. 5*

Decent, but deserves a part 2 if not a re-write. He's an IT guy so he should have wired his home for audio and video and probably would have caught her.

Getting caught following her and the response she gave spoke volumes. Yes, she was all about the control. So why? Could it be a deep-seated sense of inferiority or insecurity? That could explain her attitude toward men. As for being clueless, most loving husbands are. I was. When you trust, you don't suspect. Once uncovered, what choice did he have and what choice did she give him? Good story.

part 2

This was brutal to read. He was so blind and she was sooo evil.

Would have been better if the tired worn out cliche of the bathroom talk happening as it did, and her being a woman whos fucked the whole State of Rhode Island.

I was scared there at the end but you didn’t fuck it up. Damn good story.

After all, everything is up to date in Kansas City, and they have some mighty fine women there. Good luck.

Needs more of an ending. He should have called her out on the fake business trips.

I like this story and the way it is told. I suppose that I can accept the "overheard talk in the bathroom" cliché if only to quickly advance a short story. However, the "I've been cheating for 16 years and you didn't even notice" schtick defies the imagination of any sensible person. It puts the story into a holding pattern: if it is false, then the premise of the story is undermined; if it is true, then the mc is a cipher and not worth the effort to write about.

What we have here is one schtick too far. (Or, the flaw that croaked the damsel's yak.)

LWlurker

"Now if I stay with that woman, I know I'm gonna die

Gotta find a brand new baby

That's the reason why

I'm going to Kansas City, Kansas City here I come

Start rumor that Leslie is HIV+. Wait for one of her lovers to kill her. Collect life insurance.

Wimpy pussy cuck story.

Think this story needs a bit more.Did they divorce,did he get revenge on any other former workmates?.Also why he moved to Kansas is going to come out,some one in his former office is bound to blab.

Same story, again and again. I know you have a prodigious output, but I can’t give you full credit, because a huge number of them are pretty much the same. Why not wait for inspiration, instead of treating it like you’re working in a factory and stamping out fenders?

It sucked! Great build up & just stood rad with no ending. I really liked what I had read so the abrupt quit was terribly poor. 1 star from a potential 5.

Bill S.

A crook ending, could have been so much but Bob squibbed it.

2/5

Some of the comments make me chuckle; 'wimpy pussy cuck story' for one. "He rounded up Leslie and all of her lovers with a little help from a crack Special Forces Unit that he happened to be friends with and one by one the captives were lowered into a vat of nitric acid as they screamed pitifully for their lives but were shown no mercy. When the job was done they turned to him and said "there you go, you wimpy pussy cuck!" The MC then whimpered, cried and vomited......." What does a man have to do to avoid being branded a WPC?

Feels like the nett Page was missing.... Left a Somewhat hollow feeling

What is the point of detailing their past when the skank iscurrently cgeating!! Like who the fuvk cares how they met

He needed to burn the bitch not just run away

Is there any point whatsoever to this sad little story. I thought that HardDaysKnight wrote pathetic and dreadful stories that had zero merit to the but JustPlainBob is just as bad.

Should finish the damn story. Your good enough to do it jimbo

The nymphomaniac wife plot is getting old. No man could be married to such a woman for sixteen years and never have a clue. No man could see his wife nude over that much time and never see a love bite. Maybe the character in this story is the married woman the author is dreaming of meeting someday ?

What's the point of any story with no end? This is up there with the worst of them. 1* because I wasted my time reading it. Oh and I agree with chasbo38 , 16 years and not one clue, I don't believe it either.

Just another unfinished outline for a beginning to a story, can you imagine a real writer trying to publish a story without middle or end.