All Comments on 'What You Gave Kevin'

Who wouldn't give anything for a granddaughter like Ginny? I would be in that garage everyday with that little piglet. Double penetration - triple penetration - she'll do anything. Smokin hot!

You made the girl sound gross. Fat, with hairy armpits? Ew. That's disgusting.

Not only was the plot lame; but you've managed to make me lose my wood.

Five o'clock shadow is not hair. It's what my face has an hour after I shave. It's the same for women. In case you ever run into a real one without clothes on you will learn this. And chubby is not neccessarily fat, but it's nice to know that you have insulted at least half of the women in the world with your rude sound effect that makes you sound like a 13 year old. Thanks for reading though - next stop comphrension :).

ps... I have no problem people critizing my work since I never remove any of it but I don't like women being insulted.

I hate people that make comments and will not use their name or handle.

They are really brave folks. I love Chubby Women and a hairy bush and if their arm pits have hair no big deal.

Great Story

Great story, got me wet

Grandpa and granddaughter deserve one another.